Funnel (Repost) (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Fletcher Bailey (Reader)

Reviewed on June 21, 2004

Karla...this is magnificito...great use of the words to shape the twister...into a tongue twister...excellent poem...very smooth flow unlike a real tornado...hugs back to you...Fletcher B

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson

Reviewed on June 20, 2004

Karla, this is great! It has creativity and forceful expression! Bravo!

Reviewed by Evelyn Simon

Reviewed on June 20, 2004

Powerful words are used to discribe this storm, in such a creative
way. Great write, Karla.

Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)

Reviewed on June 20, 2004

Wow. This is so marvellous, sister,and the way you formatted it is very impressive. Excellent write.

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on June 20, 2004

excellent format!

Reviewed by Hooves Of Fire (Reader)

Reviewed on June 20, 2004

What a vivid word picture you paint. I am very afraid of tornadoes and with good reason.
Superb writing and the shape is scary!
Great work!
Hoovsie

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on June 20, 2004

Fantastic write!

Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)

Reviewed on June 19, 2004

WONDERFUL form and structure, Karla! GREAT writing, friend!

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on June 19, 2004

Excellent Karla as always...
God Bless
Michelle R Kidwell

Reviewed by Anniemoh Ohio

Reviewed on June 19, 2004

Excellent imagery!

Reviewed by Andrea Da Costa (Reader)

Reviewed on June 19, 2004

Wonderful visuals with both your words and the shape.
Very well done!

Andrea

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on June 19, 2004

Love the form its twice and nice the second time excellent poem....

Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen

Reviewed on June 19, 2004

Amazing piece, Karla! Love your word choices, form and sense of disaster, wonderful work!

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on June 19, 2004

A whirlpool of Dervishes seen from afar .
Clever and educating write .

Peter Paton

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on June 19, 2004

The Storm Goddess Karla strikes again!;-) Great one
very exciting imagery and style!

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on June 19, 2004

Behold The Storm Goddess! Very nice, Karla!

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on June 19, 2004

Thats right Karla, send that out when I am high, I can barely read when I am sober, let alone read something that spins like a tornado any other time...it is a fine read though, scary enough to make me not want to ever witness the power of that part of Nature...Peace thru Underground Shelters, Ed & Rufuz

Reviewed by Jill Eisnaugle

Reviewed on June 19, 2004

Excellent write and neat form, Karla. I'm here with a broken finger, but here, nonetheless. I hope you are well and are surviving the heat. It's humid and sweltering here today. Keep up the great writes.
(((((((HUGS)))))) and Love,
Jill :)

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on June 19, 2004

WOW! What an image-filled maestrom; could feel and imagine the fury of the storm as I read it! BRAVA on a fine, uniquely creative piece!
loved the internal rhyming; EXCELLENT!!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, karen lynn. :D

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on June 19, 2004

Very crafty, Karla! I have always wanted to do something like this too with words, but somehow, everything I writed begins from the left...unless I quote it center, then it moves to center; but cannot do a stylish one like this.

Creative indeed and a good write.

~ Sandie Angel :o) ~