Broken Sonnet, Just Like Me (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on July 17, 2004

Well first glad ya feeling better but I really liked how you took the doll and used her here in this write. how many times have friends ( or ones we thought were friends used us like this doll as they grew older).
Nice write aand message here
Tommy

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on July 17, 2004

Know the feeling Karla!!

Dark...but glad just poetry!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)

Reviewed on July 17, 2004

Incredible dark poetry Karla!!!� I loved reading it!!!� So glad you are doing better these days my Poet friend!!!� Excellent work!!!

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on July 17, 2004

interesting how you have captured the feelings of an unwanted doll; powerful, dark, and haunting write! well done, karla!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, karen lynn. :(

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on July 17, 2004

Fascinating write, Karla; almost 'Twilight Zone like' from the doll's perspective.

Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed on July 17, 2004

"Broken Sonnet, Just Like Me" brings UNIQUENESS and style to shine on the pages of poetic history.

I have read an outstanding poetical creation.

I salute You, Sublime Poet!

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on July 16, 2004

This is so well written excellent.....
Deeply felt indeed....

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on July 16, 2004

Excellent and such a powerfully emotive sonnet, so deeply felt this evening Karla,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson

Reviewed on July 16, 2004

excellent sonnet, great content and perfect rhythm. haunting,

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on July 16, 2004

Karla, this one is truly excellent, a poem of life or the lack thereof from an inanimate dolls point of view...this is what poetry is all about, a very well done write, dear friend...Peace, Friend, Ed & Rufuz

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on July 16, 2004

Karla"

Powerful write, and so well done...
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on July 16, 2004

A truly compelling dark write Karla! Thank God you
are the strong optimist and believer that you are!
I still keep you in prayer. Take care! Love eileen

Reviewed by Jill Eisnaugle

Reviewed on July 16, 2004

Neat write, Karla. The lament of a broken toy. I've had enough over the years. The last two lines of this poem speak volumes to my life.
Take care and stay cool.
(((((HUGS))))
Love,
Jill

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on July 16, 2004

Karla..i pray for you and that you are reconstituted in health..mind and body..God Willing .

Lots of Love

Peter Paton

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on July 16, 2004

A very dark emotional write extremely well done. Glad to hear your okay, I would of asked. :-)

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on July 16, 2004

It Is OK To Grieve In Secret But,I Know You AreStronger But, WEAK IN THE YOUR MIND! I Tell It Like It Is_

Trust My Word When (God) Calls- It Is Your Time To Go Up Or Down YOU WILL GO EVEN IF BY SUICIDE!

TRASK

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on July 16, 2004

is this the lament of the forgotten toy???
when i was a kid i used to wonder if toys had hearts.......lol

i was not a doll lover, but i had so many of them, all i did was line them up in my bed and sleep with them.....
cool write here.......very creative...........
ty for this one!!!
how have u been?
pax A

Reviewed by E. Richardson

Reviewed on July 16, 2004

Nicely done!...a bit on the dark side for you, Lady Buckeye, but sometimes the muse takes you to places a tad different.