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What Can I Say (Haiku Chain)
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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What can I say in
Sev-en-teen short syl-la-bles
To reach inside you?
~
What can I say to
Make you receive the message
I'm trying to send?
~
What can I say in
Poetic Haiku format
To speak to your soul?
~
What can I say to
Make you see what I'm seeing?
It's there before you!
~
What can I say in
As few words as possible
So you comprehend?
~
What can I say to
Bring you right into my world
And know who I am?
~
What can I say in
Se-ven-teen short syl-la-bles
To reach inside you?
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(C) Copy written, August 24, 2004, by Karla Dorman.


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Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on August 24, 2004
Its been said :-) Great write!

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on August 24, 2004
You've said it very well. Bravo!

Reviewed on August 24, 2004
Karla you said it all.
You said it all too well
And the message is clear
I received it all.
your brother and friend abdinoor

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on August 23, 2004
Magnificent Karla!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson
Reviewed on August 23, 2004
love it

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on August 23, 2004
Say now I love you
Say it loud, say it strong too
Dear God I LOVE YOU!

A little ku from me to you...Peace, Ed & Rufuz

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on August 23, 2004
How stunning! you have become a KU Queen;-) Karla the Ku Queen!
That graphic is fantastic too!

Reviewed by Jane Rodway (Reader)
Reviewed on August 23, 2004
I think you have to say what's in your heart,and you did! :) That picture is the coolest of the cool:)

Reviewed by Fletcher Bailey (Reader)
Reviewed on August 23, 2004
Karla, these are fantastic haiku's...really great...Fletcher B

Reviewed by ~Indigo~ Elga
Reviewed on August 23, 2004
Dear Karla,

So much is conveyed
in so few or short lines now
my heart you have touched.

Thank you dear Karla,
for some really neat work here
so welcome and great.

Warm hugs and love
Elga

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on August 23, 2004
Well said.......
YF..........Ron

Reviewed by Katryn Dougherty
Reviewed on August 23, 2004
a lot :)

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on August 23, 2004
What Can I (you0 Say_

Never Give Up!

TRASK

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on August 23, 2004
The best words are undoubtedly.." I love you " Karla..
Hugs and love
Peter

Reviewed by Franz Kessler
Reviewed on August 23, 2004
Nive form, and deep write. Every dialogue is a translation from one mind into another- with many loose ends. Franz

Reviewed on August 23, 2004
(((Karla)))

What can you say? You have said a mouthful, and you have struck gold with this awesome write! Well done; BRAVA! Love the pic, too! NEAT!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on August 23, 2004
These are all great.


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