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I Would Really Like To Write
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Don't know where this one came from--it woke me up at three this morning. And so, I write. :-)


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"I WOULD REALLY LIKE TO WRITE"
     (C) Copy written, October 4, 2004, by Karla Dorman.
*************************************************************************
I would really like to write,
But my hands won't co-operate.
They are blind to words they hear.
They think they're being used as bait!
*
I would really like to write,
But my hands take that as a threat.
They'll do what they want to do.
They think I'm a lousy poet!
*
I would really like to write,
But my hands betray once more.
They pluck the words from the air,
And throw them, screaming, to the floor!
*
I would really like to write,
But my hands remain in the dark.
They just cannot comprehend
The art of words leaving their mark.
*
I would really like to write,
But my hands go to sleep again.
My Muse is broken, shattered.
My hands will not pick up the pen.

 


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 Reviews of "I Would Really Like To Write"
Reviewed on October 11, 2004
Karla
This is excellent as always
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang
Reviewed on October 7, 2004
Excellent, again as always!
Your Muse is working
Overtime!(LOL)
Becca

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on October 4, 2004
Geez you good at that hour Karla!!

This is really great!!

love Tinka

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on October 4, 2004
I'm glad you finally took control and
gave us this wonderful poem! I do most of my
best writing at 3:00 am, methinks it's the poets
witching hour!;-)

Reviewed on October 4, 2004
Not bad for three in the morning; it's strange how the Muse works at times! Wonderfully adorable write; well done! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D

LOL at SueB's review~

Reviewed by Susan Barton (Reader)
Reviewed on October 4, 2004
bad hands! :)

I've found mine writing just the opposite of what I told them to write :)

Reviewed by Karen Chalfant (Reader)
Reviewed on October 4, 2004
Darling poem, Karla! My gosh, how many of us can relate to this!

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson
Reviewed on October 4, 2004
great write... i often feel my brain won't cooperate. i have the poem "in me" but my words (order, syntax, etc.) get all jumbled up.

Reviewed by Sue Hess
Reviewed on October 4, 2004
throw that pen away and grab the keyboard, hands are basically lazy and the pen is too much work...just kidding, you write extremely well handless

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on October 4, 2004
Amputate them hands, get yourself some new ones...even though they write so well already, maybe they are just tired and need a vacation, wrap them in ice or let them soak in warm water with Avon bubble bath on them...then spank them if they dont write what you want...Peace, Ed & Rufuz


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