Let There Be...Light (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on October 16, 2004

C'est tr�s bien compos�, Karla. Merci! Ton ami de la C-B, Canada; R�gis

Reviewed on October 16, 2004

"I will be the first thing you see when you die." Loved this line. Very strong strokes to this poem. Great job, Karla.

Carmen :-)

Reviewed by Phillip William Allen

Reviewed on October 16, 2004

Powewrful punch to this one Karla.

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on October 16, 2004

Beautiful Karla, this was outstanding! I loved that picture!

Reindeer

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on October 16, 2004

Darkness can't turn out light, but light turns out darkness..

Superb..

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on October 15, 2004

light becomes you ...
excellent ...

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on October 15, 2004

Yowza! You blinded me with this one! Shine on Lady of Lights!
May you always be here to cast your glow!;-) Kudo's to you Karla!
love ,
Eileen

Reviewed by Vincent Martin (Reader)

Reviewed on October 15, 2004

Lady Karla, thou are always filled with light, and so it is reflected in the soul of thy poetry! ~DarkBard~

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on October 15, 2004

This is a sparkling and luminous composition Karla..
You certainly shine your dazzling light in the Den...
Love and hugs
Peter

Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang

Reviewed on October 15, 2004

Very descriptive write,Karla!
I really like the poem!
Becca,Brain Faithful

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on October 15, 2004

Powerful write with great descriptions, leaving the reader with no doubts to what light is.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on October 15, 2004

A Very Illuminating Write, Karla. Well Done!

Reviewed by Kay P Devenish

Reviewed on October 15, 2004

Light!
I was created in the Beginning.
I will be the first thing you see when you die.
~~

the above are my favorite lines in this excellent poem
Karla... I REALLY enjoyed this read.
Best wishes always
from
kay

Reviewed by Nordette Adams

Reviewed on October 15, 2004

Outstanding, Karla! You have captured yourself. Lux et veritas, my friend.

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on October 15, 2004

WOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

AWESOME write, and superbly crafted! BRAVA! May your pen never run dray, and your muse always be productive! You soar higher than the eagles with your talent; and you are due for better and greater things! WELL DONE, Karla!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D *standing ovation*

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson

Reviewed on October 15, 2004

this is just awesome. and that pic is such an inspiration. i have come to know you as a "lightbearer" here on AD - and your fascination with the Northern Lights is only the beginning of that! live in the light always, Dawn

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on October 15, 2004

Excellent response Karla!!

Love the Picture!!

Need balance to do that I know...lol!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on October 15, 2004

Karla excellent response to Kate's challenge, keep it up...
God Bless
Michelle~