I AM OKAY. This just came to me, and so, I write. :-)
Poetry is written by fools such as I. Whether I've the talent to string words together into something beautiful remains to be seen.
Poetry is written by fools such as I. Whether I'm ready to pull the ripcord and let myself fall remains to be seen.
Poetry is written by fools such as I. Whether I'm willing to swim with the sharks who may eat me remains to be seen.
Poetry is written by fools such as I. Whether I've the courage to face my fears and write ANYWAY remains to be seen.
Poetry is written by fools such as I.
(C) Copy written, 10 November, 2004, by Karla Dorman.
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Reviews of "Remains To Be Seen"
Reviewed by Simon Thurlow (Reader)
Reviewed on November 13, 2004
I disagree Karla I am afraid. Poetry is not written by fools. Rather it is written by those with a message from the heart and the courage to put in write for all too see. Often to dramatic results. You keep writing young lady. You aint no fool to me !!
That's the way I often feel, asking myself if I'm ready to pull the ripcord or not. Great poem, Karla!
Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)
Reviewed on November 11, 2004
Karla, you have once again established your position on the entrance of the greats! Your unique ability to venture into the realm of the unknown, is a shining testament to your overall qualifications to be considered amongst one of the best! Outstanding work, my friend. Happy Veteran’s Day! Thank you for sharing it. Take care and be well.
Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on November 11, 2004
Powerful expressions of thought that holds a truth in it that I find absolutely amazing. The true freedome of writing is to write what you believe dispite those who wish you to think like them. You my dear friend walk your own path. Congrats!
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on November 11, 2004
Well done Karla, I love the form of this, I always enjoy experimental form.
Excellent write. Time has already told that you are a poweful poet, so nothing remains to be seen, my dear Karla. Keep fighting and keep conquering your fears with the spears of poetry.
I think it is a thing of great courage to open your work up and to admit that you are vulnerable but you are brilliant and certainly no one's fool.
Your talent shines through everything you do - a true lady of the lights indeed you are!
Hooves
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Never doubt it..
Love
Peter
wonderfully inspired poetry ...
Strung with beauty, grace, and penned perfection - my friend, this is an exceptional poem!!
Robert
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Your talent shines through everything you do - a true lady of the lights indeed you are!
Hooves
ONLY FOOl'S NEVER MAKE MISTAKES,i.e. There Remains To Be Seen!
TRASK
Excellent! Love how your muse works; may you keep musing away! BRAVA on yet another fine poem!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D
God Bless
Michelle~