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Merry Christmas!
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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A tree, 30 SECONDS after ignition. Just 30 seconds.

FICTIONAL.

A warning this Christmas season to prevent fires. Two years ago, on Christmas Eve, a family I know was displaced by a fire. They lost everything except their lives.


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"MERRY CHRISTMAS"
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The smoke was a solid thing, heavy as cement.
Pressing down upon my shoulders,
(T
hese massive, massive boulders.)
My dying was easy, as far as dying went.

I thought I heard my little boy screaming in pain.
The last thing a Mom wants to hear,
(Kiss the boo-boos and dry the tears.)
But Mommy won't be a Mommy ever again.

The last thing I heard was a carol being sung.
It sounded like my teenaged girl,
(Voice of an angel, hair that curled.)
The air was hot as it ripped the breath from my lungs.

Before I died, I forgot to turn out the lights.
Because the children loved them so,
The tree caught fire, don't you know.
The house was destroyed, my family died that night.
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(C) Copy written, 1 December, 2004, by Karla Dorman.
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Every year, nearly 12,000 calls, requiring the services of the Fire Department, are called into 9-1-1 to report Christmas tree fires.  At least 250 people are injured and 40 people die as a result of those fires, and many homes are damaged or destroyed.

Keep alert.  Read and follow manufacturer's instructions, and use common sense.  Do not buy a tree that is dry or has dropping needles; water your live tree frequently.  Do not use candles on your tree.  Do not leave any candles unattended.  Please keep your pets and children away from the tree and don't let them play with the lights or wiring.  Keep matches as well as lighters out of reach, preferably in a locked cabinet.  Make sure the tree stand is sturdy and will not tip over.  And ALWAYS, ALWAYS unplug the tree before leaving the house or going to bed.

And...Merry Christmas!  May it be a safe one.


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 Reviews of "Merry Christmas!"
Reviewed by Silke Lance, Dr. Ph (Reader)
Reviewed on December 5, 2004
Very important reminder.Thanks!

Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on December 2, 2004
Thank you for reminding everyone of the dangers...a good write

Reviewed on December 2, 2004
Karla,

A versed masterpiece ... powerfully crafted that awakens the senses with exceptional clarity ... thanks for sharing your extraordinary talent!!

Best wishes,

Robert

Reviewed by Karen Chalfant (Reader)
Reviewed on December 2, 2004
Very important reminder, Karla!!

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
Reviewed on December 2, 2004
It's already happened just down the road a bit from me...a terrible scene it was.
They did get out with their lives...So they still have the most precious of their treasures.
Excellent message Karla!

Lisa

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on December 2, 2004
Very sage advice here, Karla; hope many heed it.

Reviewed on December 2, 2004
Powerful message, one thatneeds to be addressed
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on December 1, 2004
Wonderful message Karla!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on December 1, 2004
Timely message! Great write.

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on December 1, 2004
No tree here, nor lights either, just me and ruffie smokin' a bone, igniting our lungs and burning out our brains...ed

Reviewed by Michelle Mills
Reviewed on December 1, 2004
One of my greatest fears...bless you for addressing it. Excellent write. Michelle

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on December 1, 2004
You do us all a good service Karla...by reminding us of the mortal danger of fire this Christmas...
Peter

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on December 1, 2004
Thank you for the reminder, Karla. Though I love the smell of a fresh tree, I no longer buy them...I just feel safer with the artificial ones.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on December 1, 2004
Thanks for posting this Karla! It's a public service, and we all need the reminder! Well done!

Reviewed on December 1, 2004
OH gee, now you went and opened a fear I only get a week before Xmas about two weeks early. I'm a takecareofthetreeholic. LOL Great message

Reviewed on December 1, 2004
(((Karla)))

A timely reminder of how quickly lives can change if people don't take the necessary precautions to ensure that their Christmas won't turn into a day of tragedy! Thank you for this sharing; powerful, gut-wrenching write of Christmas tragedy that can be avoided if people only be careful! Well done; BRAVA~

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :( >tears <

Perhaps you have saved a life today....

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
Reviewed on December 1, 2004
Each year they show how fast a house can catch fire from a tree fire. We have an artificial tree and put it up and away from the pooches as they get curious about it. But thank your for this invaluable message.

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on December 1, 2004
Very sad. A house burned to the ground here last night. The fire was caused by candles, which according to the fire spokesperson, are the #1 cause for house fires in this county. Thanks for your post.

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on December 1, 2004
Thank you so much for this, Karla. I haven't heard of this being widespread in the UK - isn't that strange, assuming we all go through the same processes?! So sad that some should experience this form of personal tragedy - I had a car that looked like the towering inferno in your picture that went up literally in 20 seconds - it is beyond belief how quickly these things happen. Thank you for your concern and be safe and well this Christmas!! LOL Kate xx

Reviewed by George Jackson
Reviewed on December 1, 2004
Thank you for posting this.


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