Gotta warn you, this is a strange one. Don't know where it came from, but perhaps my upcoming cruise inspired this?? LOL I writes 'em as I gets 'em. Enjoy! :-)
"POETRY UPON THE WIND" ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ i smell poetry in the air. a faint scent of ink on humid southerly breezes conjures images of my favorite poet's madness to capture the words he sees in his tequila glass dancing with the worm to a passionate salsa beat.
i want to be where the words are. so i dive into a tall glass of mexican rum and ai chihuahua there i am lying naked on a cozumel beach surrounded by latin lovers who love my meter and everything else about me.
the worm suddenly turns nasty. *p'tu!* it spits me out spinning through empty time and space back to my dull life with thoughts of mad poets who write words with meaning for those lonely girls who have no life who wish they could write their poetry upon the wind. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
(C) Copy written, 10 January, 2005, by Karla Dorman. ALL RIGHTS RESERVED.
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Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on January 12, 2005
Insightful write that is very thought provoking.
Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader)
Reviewed on January 12, 2005
This is Great Karla! You are amazing.!! Ai Chihuahua!
Have lossa fun Hope that worm doesn't get a chance to spit you out.
Have a Wonderful Safe Fun and Happy Cruise.
Love from this lonely girl who has no life who wishes I could write poetry upon the wind ) :
Tracey
Karla -- I do believe I, personally, hold this amoung your best -- excellent twists and expression around the worm. And very striking over all. BRAVO
Vicky
Nothing wrong with dreams of tequila sunrises. The ins and outs of this one are superb, Karla! Love it when the worm spits you out. The last part reminds me of long cold winter days at the YMCA, UW-Madison, looking out of the third floor window and listening to Simon and Garfunkel sing, "I am a rock, a fortress steep and mighty, .."
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on January 10, 2005
It may be different but it's so unique that it demands attention and admiration!
Wow! you took a dive into the wild wonders
of the worm and came out without a squirm!
Karla this is fantastic writing,i'd like to
see more of it! Brava! Dare to to different!
Walkin' on the wild side are we? Tequila? Cruises? Latin Lovers? My My!!
I must be one of those lonely girls...but up until now didn't realize just HOW lonely!
Gotta run now! I'm headin' to the store for my bottle of tequila!!!!! See if I can't brighten up my life!
I liked this write Karla..it didn't sound alot like the Karla I've come to know...but it was fun and light!
Hope you have fun on that cruise!
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Have lossa fun Hope that worm doesn't get a chance to spit you out.
Have a Wonderful Safe Fun and Happy Cruise.
Love from this lonely girl who has no life who wishes I could write poetry upon the wind ) :
Tracey
May your cruise flow as beautifully as this eloquently crafted write - exceptional piece my friend!!
Best wishes,
Robert
A fine poem, Karla, and I truly hope you enjoy your cruise.
PS I always swallow that worm in the tequilla bottle - excellent protein - and inspiration!
Love Tinka
Vicky
Happy cruising!
Carolyn
Peace, Carole
of the worm and came out without a squirm!
Karla this is fantastic writing,i'd like to
see more of it! Brava! Dare to to different!
Defintely different from what you normally write, but then again you are often surprising me with your words...
God Bless
Michelle!
Where's the booze cruise Karla, you can tell me when you're sober..
I must be one of those lonely girls...but up until now didn't realize just HOW lonely!
Gotta run now! I'm headin' to the store for my bottle of tequila!!!!! See if I can't brighten up my life!
I liked this write Karla..it didn't sound alot like the Karla I've come to know...but it was fun and light!
Hope you have fun on that cruise!
Lisa
Hmmm...weird. Have you been drinkin' tequila again??? LOL JK
Strange (but excellent) write! Well done! Love the imagery; magnifico!!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D