Connected (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on February 22, 2005

(((Karla)))

This is beyond bizarre; but it is still a very good write! I love that line, "She slaps them out of her pen". *Whap, whap, whap* LOL Terrific write, and have fun on your cruise; just be safe is all I ask! I shall miss you like crazy, but you deserve a break from me! LOL

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :)

Reviewed by Joel Raja Kumar J (Reader)

Reviewed on February 22, 2005

Not so sure you are alright, Karla. I am thinking the cruise ahs gotten into yore head. Poor Babe!!!

Enjoy your trip and bring back some memories to share with us. Moma will be pleased, may be:) :)

Love from India - Joel -

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on February 22, 2005

Excellent, powerful write Karla....
Hugs, Carole

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on February 22, 2005

Wonderful and powerfully perfected!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on February 22, 2005

she slaps them out of my pen

Excellent way to get those babies down on paper - and only three more days!!!!!

Reviewed by Barbara Terry

Reviewed on February 21, 2005

Very good Karla. As you know I too was very misunderstood. May the Lord be with you, and at your side always. With much love, peace, & (((HUGS))), your very dear friend in Wisconsin, and sister in Christ our Lord,

Barbara Lynn Terry
"If I have to...Then I may as well be."

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on February 21, 2005

an excellent poem revealing your frustration at being misunderstood ...

Reviewed by Phillip William Allen

Reviewed on February 21, 2005

Absolutely perfectly penned

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on February 21, 2005

Kind of a dark write for you, Karla...but still it seems to have a power that is kind of indescribable, but nonetheless still you...does that make any sense? ED

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on February 21, 2005

Great write. Sometimes, the ones that just come out are the best.

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on February 21, 2005

This is a great write, hope you enjoy your cruise...
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on February 21, 2005

So it's a booze cruise?
Karla I love what flows from your pen.
After a year at Aberlean, I know how sweet and caring Texan babes are..

Reviewed by Nordette Adams

Reviewed on February 21, 2005

You're going deeper into your muse, Karla. Let it flow.

Reviewed by Michelle Mills

Reviewed on February 21, 2005

It's hard to run away from our muse-even if it's not the muse we asked for. Incredible piece Karla. Michelle

Reviewed by Faye Enno (Reader)

Reviewed on February 21, 2005

Powerful piece! :)

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on February 21, 2005

Profound write that shows a deeply hidden event that when touched is like a raw nerve. You're doing right to expose it Karla! superb poem!

Love Eileen...(the T.warning is lifted;-) Still pouring rain though...
reminds me of when I lived in Illinois, and why I left;-)...

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)

Reviewed on February 21, 2005

This is intense and something that believe it or not I have felt and one day when it is appropiate I can write it. But you sure hit one on the head.

Reviewed by Sue Hess

Reviewed on February 21, 2005

wow, this is very intense...much anger here karla...i hope everything is okay