New Born Poems (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on April 9, 2005

Hey, This is really neat and so true. I could just vision my struggles in writting a poem on occasion. Thanks for sharing.
Pearl

Reviewed by Muhammad Al Mahdi

Reviewed on March 19, 2005

First class. It shows your lyric talent. Keep them like this and then, too, try as many Senryus as can. Those I have read are very much a genre of your own.

Love and blessings

Reviewed by Sherry Gibson

Reviewed on March 15, 2005

Karla,
This was writing at it's best. The best description of writing I've read so far. Excellent work.

Sherry

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*� (Reader)

Reviewed on March 15, 2005

Oh Karla, this is just outstanding!

Conratulations ... and may you have many "children".

Blessings,
Joseph

Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain

Reviewed on March 15, 2005

Karla,

Metaphorically superb; beautifully written my friend ... wonderful!!

Blessings,

Robert

Reviewed by George Jackson

Reviewed on March 15, 2005

Oh, I'm keeping this one. Excellent.

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on March 15, 2005

(((Karla)))

This is fantastic; one of your best (and all of your poems are good!)! BRAVA on a beautiful, inspiring write; very well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Phillip William Allen

Reviewed on March 15, 2005

Got to agree with Sherry on this one. Most excellant

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on March 15, 2005

This is nothing short of a fantastic write, Karla. I really enjoyed this!
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on March 15, 2005

What a marvelous poetic birth, Karla!

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on March 15, 2005

What a splendid write, Karla....you captured the moment

Hugs, Carole

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on March 15, 2005

This is an excellent piece Karla my frined!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by F William Broome

Reviewed on March 15, 2005

Hey Karla - Dang, I needed that! Thanks much for putting these thoughts and convictions into an understandable creation. But, yours is almost grown, and soon to be on its own! ! ! - Bill

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on March 14, 2005

If that is the case then I have been prego with a poem for like 20 some years...how do I get it out and do they make diapers for them...? ed

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on March 14, 2005

Karla
This is an excellent write, I believe one of my favorite pieces from you...
God Bless
Michelle!

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on March 14, 2005

creating a poem is like the birth process ... it grows within you, then takes a life on its own ...

outstanding poem ...

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on March 14, 2005

Another splendid poem from the poet Karla, as she stains
the page with her ink of poetic passion. Kudo's!

etw

Reviewed by john zimmerman

Reviewed on March 14, 2005

splendid work, k.j.!
your bestest yet !!!!!!!!

love
j+

Reviewed by Karen Chalfant (Reader)

Reviewed on March 14, 2005

This is a great word picture of creating a poem, Karla! Keep up the good work!

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)

Reviewed on March 14, 2005

Now I really liked this one Karla.

Reviewed by ~Indigo~ Elga

Reviewed on March 14, 2005

Dear Karla,

May your days be filled with laughter as well as with so many tiny words making permanent marks on reams of paper, as "New Born Poems" appear. A superb write Karla.

warm hugs
Elga Your friend in SA

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on March 14, 2005

Now This Is Write Right On!!

TRASK

Reviewed by Barbara Terry

Reviewed on March 14, 2005

OMG sis, you have captured the purest poetic writing style. the words are conceived in the poets mind, and the in the third trimester the miracle of poetic birth occurs. I like this one sis, it is touching to the soul. May the Lord be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love, peace, & (((HUGS))), Barbie

"If Ihave to...Then I may as well be."