~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ...an' my eyes were watchin' when He reach down th'ough the blackness of the storm. i heard His voice whisper above the thunder: 'PEACE. PEACE, BE STILL.' an' the sun broke th'ough the clouds at that moment. suddenly, the rays of hope shone in my soul: i weren't afraid no more. ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~
(C) Copy written, 19 March, 2005, by Karla Dorman.
Yup. With the inner peace which passes all understanding. One stays calm no matter what.
Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
Reviewed on March 19, 2005
I agaree this is a powerful and positive write and my mother always said that and another one. "I have learned in whatsoever state that I am in therein to be content.'
OMG sis, you have done it again. When I said you were a talented writer, I meant every word of it. I like the picture you show to enhance the poem too. It is very befitting, because it actually does look like God is there. Thnx for sharing. May the Lord bw ith you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, & (((HUGS))), Barbie
Love the voice here, which is deep southern and comforting in itself. This has such a gravity to it, as well as being cosily colloquial. Very effective, Karla, and the visual is quite stunning. TY for this: can hear the tone that stills the waves! Kate xx
When two men hit the reset button and decide to go out looking for the good in the world, they not only find it but also a lot more.
P.S. The title is listed on Amazon under Look for Something Good by Robert Drews (not by Robert H. Drews)
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Sherry
"If I have to...Then I may as well be."
Your Friend,TRASK
Beautiful message of hope in this troubled world; we need to read more poems like this! AWESOME job; brava!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D
God Bless
Michelle!
It surely impresses the message Well done! etw