Commiseration (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on May 17, 2005

Insightful deep write. To understand is to heal.

Reviewed by Paul Williams

Reviewed on May 17, 2005

Superb and powerful as the storm...ah! how we understand our environment more than we know.

Paul;-]

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on May 17, 2005

Most profound, Karla.

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on May 17, 2005

Oh yes!! I do believe I am the one to conjure them up sometimes, and it's them that are giving vent to my own frustrations; They are therefore a friend saying "Let it all out, Honey!" This has gone deeply to ground with me, Karla, thank you: I feel energised! :)) LOL Kate xx PS Love the way you extend this hand of friendship to your "enemy"!

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on May 16, 2005

Outstanding write Karla...I too love T-storms...

Peace and love, Carole

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on May 16, 2005

Ah I do so love T-storms, though Rufuz does not share my love therein...this poem shows both pain and anger in the storm, wish I could see the lightening...Ed

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on May 16, 2005

Oh,oh ,oh...do I read this well...excellent!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on May 16, 2005

Karla this is a great write
God Bless
Michelle!

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on May 16, 2005

Powerfully dark and passionate poetry, Karla. Once we understand nature, our fear of it can subside.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Larry Rochelle

Reviewed on May 16, 2005

Good, dark emotion here. Full of concern.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on May 16, 2005

I've never equated a storm with pain, but it's a nice sentiment well stated and punctuated by the flash of lightning.gif

Ron

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on May 16, 2005

You are so deeply compassionate Karla!
A fine poem that grips the emotions!

Love,
Alrisha

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on May 16, 2005

OOOO, are you having great thunder storms. We had one clap of thunder in the last year.(:

I love texan weather, and BBQ's. Interesting subtext special K..

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on May 16, 2005

This is so sublime and yet so clear. I can instantly recognize, sympathise and emphasize with this Poem Karla and you are one heck of a writer and this is the proof. Well done.

Felix

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on May 16, 2005

(((Karla)))

Excellent write, and I love the picture! Very well done; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)

Reviewed on May 16, 2005

I think so too Karla.

Reviewed by Cathrine Hottran

Reviewed on May 16, 2005

excellent!