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Gullible
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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This is not how I feel. However, this is a reflection on society as a whole--it seems we've lost our compassion. No one gives a damn anymore.


do i have
g-u-l-l-i-b-l-e
stamped on my
forehead in
scarlet shades
of red?

                                                                              well, do i??

the lonely
and depressed
come to me
with stories
of how sad
they are.

                                                                            i don't care.

the aged
and infirm
lost in their
sickness of
the day slow
me down.

                                                                        don't touch me.

the homeless
and down-on-
their-luck beg
for my help
yet don't help
themselves.

                                                                                 too busy.

telethons
and cans for
charity
want the hard
earned cash i
don't have.

                                                                                  go away.

                                      who helped me
                                        when i was
                                        needing it?
                                         even God
                                       didn't hear
                                       my prayers.

                                       there's only
                                         so much i
                                        can do-get
                                        back to me
                                        when i give
                                        a rat's ass.

                               (c) 2005, Karla Dorman.

 

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 Reviews of "Gullible"
Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on June 2, 2005
Karla this sums up all too well the way a majority of people these days look upon the situation our society has put us in. I don't for a minute believe though that you are one of those. There are still so many good kind people reaching out with their hearts, wallets, time and even just their ears and they are making a difference. This poem says a lot but it also says a lot you cannot see. Well done.

Felix

Reviewed by E. Richardson
Reviewed on June 1, 2005
good good goood...this is really good...tight, no wasted words...and as you can see from your reviews, it grabs folks.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on June 1, 2005
A true compassionate writers poem, showing the world for what it is. No denying it has become insensitive and inured to most things. A very predicted condition as told by our Creator. No one listens!
Excellent Karla!

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on June 1, 2005
Thats called reality of life methinks!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Roger Ochs
Reviewed on June 1, 2005
If you didn't "give a rat's ass" you wouldn't write. Thus, we know that this is not about you.

Reviewed on June 1, 2005
Ah yes Karla, so powerfully true, you nailed this one cold. It is a very unfriendly world now,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on June 1, 2005
What was once a friendly neighbourhood, the houses have now turned into moat filled castles. Showing off, has replaced caring.

Poignantly excellent.

Make poverty history. Hope Sir Bob pulls it off..

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on June 1, 2005
I believe that many today no longer give a damn about anything, or anyone - except themselves. I see it every day on our streets.

But you are not one of those people,Karla - and you never ever will be.

Reviewed by Handsum Hart
Reviewed on June 1, 2005
It's a very cold world out there sometimes.
Well said.

Take care

Reviewed on June 1, 2005
(((Karla)))

WOW! This speaks volumes; it is so sad we have forgotten how to care for our fellow man. It's no wonder people are so apathetic today and numb to the "burdens" of society! Very well done; brava!!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :(

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on June 1, 2005
Don't know how you can say we have run out of compassion. There are a zillion television programs (Ophra, et al) concerning compassion and they keep coming. Everywhere you look someone has their hand out. You can't walk into a store without be accosted by the compassionate with their hands out. America, first and foremost, is the most compassionate nation in the world. Sorry, you struck a nerve.

Reviewed on June 1, 2005
Karla this is a powerful write
God Bless
Michelle!

Reviewed by Sue Hess
Reviewed on June 1, 2005
karla, i know this isn't really you but i'm also sure you and everyone else has felt this way at one time or another, at least for a few minutes. you wrote it very well


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