Senryu Chain: We Will Rise (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Safi Abdi

Reviewed on January 19, 2006

This is such a happy poem...Safi

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater

Reviewed on January 16, 2006

Disco'd up the Den, Karla! Remember that old song House of the Rising Sun? Well, New Orleans will rise again!

Sage

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on January 16, 2006

Thanks for this write
Your friend.......Ron
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Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on January 16, 2006

I do intend to see this place once again :-) Thanks for this sharing :-)

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on January 16, 2006

Karla,

New Orleans WILL rise again, better than ever! Beautiful uplifting tribute to the future of the city that care forgot! Very well done! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin sister, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*� (Reader)

Reviewed on January 15, 2006

Dear Karla,

Wherever Life is truly celebrated has to be a wonderful place.

Love & Light,
Joseph

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on January 15, 2006

Ahhh how I would love to visit this city so attached to my acadian anchestory
Felix

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on January 15, 2006

i visisted New Orleans a few years ago ... it would be a true delight to see it rebuilt ...

Reviewed by Susan Cook-Jahme (Reader)

Reviewed on January 14, 2006

I watched the destruction on TV here in the southern most tip of Africa and my heart was sore for all living there. If they rebuild I think every home and building should be no more than two stories and on stilts! Susan

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on January 14, 2006

I think that New Orleans will be rebuilt and will become a much better place to live than it was before, though my personal feeling is that the below sea level and sea level areas should never be rebuilt for housing. It was a shame what happened there, but it would be a crime if it happened again. Nice poem, Karla.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on January 14, 2006

Very nice. It will be better than ever.

Reviewed by Regina Pounds

Reviewed on January 14, 2006

Karla, I love your poem..short and super descriptive...the image is beautiful, as well

Gina

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on January 14, 2006

Will someday have to visit that fair city...Peace, Ed

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on January 14, 2006

I hope it does return to its former beauty...one of my favorite cities...great write Karla!

Carole...love and peace

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on January 14, 2006

Beautiful thoughts Karla, I hope the soul can be rekindled, as Jery says it won't be easy.

As for the pinched nerve, I had it badly for a while,I was put in traction. At first it didn't seem to help, but after a few treatments when I stopped and just used some rotating exercise and advil, it finally went away. I know they ususally flare up again unexpectedly, but it's been awhile so I hope it's gone. Keeping you in prayer.Stay in bed even if you can't sleep, the bed rest at night is more of a healer than we know. I had to force myself to stay
put;-)

Eileen

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on January 14, 2006

Oh, it will rise, slowly, but the city was robbed of its soul, it will never be the same. I wish this were not true, but I am afraid that it is.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on January 14, 2006

Lovely write Karla!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Rose L

Reviewed on January 14, 2006

Hiya Karla,

I love the "can do" attitude of this! Especially when it comes from one who knows. Though I've never made it New Orleans, you give me a taste of what a vibrant city it has been before and will be once again. Bravo!

Peace,

~Rose~