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depression
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~~~a fictionalized account of depression (although i've been there)~~~

why should i have to put on a
happy face and pretend that
everythings okay

why should i have to get past
the hurt and pretend it never
ever happened

why should i have to go about
my daily life when all i want to do
is stay in bed

why does every little thing make
me cry and i wonder if im finally
going insane

why am i feeling this way and i
wonder if my life will ever get
any better

why do i eat and eat im not that
hungry whats wrong with me i
really hate this

can anyone help me can you
hear my cries when will i feel
normal happy

again


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Reviewed by Jeanette Foresta
Reviewed on May 25, 2002
switch your obsession to something positive, like sex! lol

Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green
Reviewed on May 23, 2002
Boy, have I been there...and you put it so well. I would like to talk to you about the possibility of posting this poem on my disabilities site. Feel like it, check it out by clicking on the spinningstraw.com link on my bio page.
Meanwhile, keep on keepin' on! Your sisters are with ya! Brothers, too!! Phyllis:)

Reviewed by Josephine Bohen
Reviewed on May 22, 2002
So THATS whats wrong with me!!!!

Josie

Reviewed by Afrika Abney
Reviewed on May 22, 2002
Well said.Great use of language and rhythm.Very vivid and powerful.Stay strong

Reviewed by Ed Lupinacci (Reader)
Reviewed on May 22, 2002
You brought depression to life. I think I will go eat something.
Ed

Reviewed by RON P KING
Reviewed on May 21, 2002
GOOD WRITE.

Reviewed by Sheryl Sorenson (Reader)
Reviewed on May 21, 2002
Sorry you've been there, depression is so horrible. Good poem.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on May 21, 2002
This is the protocol of depression...good write

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on May 21, 2002
Good description on depression.

Reviewed by Cathy J. Montgomery
Reviewed on May 21, 2002
Another great write, Karla--perfect description of depression...(been there, too, for sure!)

Reviewed on May 21, 2002
Aaaahhhhh!!!!! You have just described the depression really well!!!!!

Great job on this one!!!!!

Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Chris Stevens (Reader)
Reviewed on May 21, 2002
a sad but real condition... great write!!!!


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