Seven stanzas of free style verse, six lines each, no syllable count; punctuation within verse but not at ends, all in lowercase type.
After each verse: two four syllable lines which must rhyme.
T'ain't as easy as it looks. TRUST me. :)
Hope I did it right, Jerry!
lightning flickers nervously as thunder mutters curses under ozone drunk breath there is tension in the sky as the clouds try to get out of the way
partnership, through broken in two
its been a long time coming the undercurrents the suspicion of her unfaithfulness building until it was exposed in a flash
a shout of pain and rage, insane
thunder shoves lightning from her palace in the heavens with a resounding crack banishing her to the earth below, to walk in shame never to return
she can't go home always to roam
rain trickles from her eyes she knew it was wrong to cheat, but what was she supposed to do? thunder always complained about everything
in a loud voice she had no choice
he wanted her all to himself he did not want to share her beauty with the world but she was a star and stars are constantly in the public eye
the way it is when in show biz
they were a team the most successful duo the storm produced they fell in love and married a perfect compliment to each other now separated, heading for divorce
her damnation stuns the nation
she walks the earth, forlorn wishing she could correct her mistake but knowing he won't forgive her he's found another forgotten already
Hey, StormSpinner!! Just how long HAVE I been away??!! And what does this change of identity mean, I ask myself?? This rates as the most wonderfully crafted allegory that could well endure as a classic, Ms Whirlwind. And the form suits it so very well. My congratulations to both the Storyteller and the Formdeviser. A winning combination! TY Kate xx
WOWEE, WOW, WOW!!!!!!! This is absolutely spectacular! Very well done; you have mastered Jerry's style of writing perfectly in meter, form, and rhyme! BRAVA!!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. (Hey, I rhymed! LOL I did a poem! NEENER, NEENER, NEENER! LOL)
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on February 4, 2006
BY JOVE, I BELIEVE SHE'S GOT IT! This was very good, Karla, very well done. Thank you for attempting AND succeeding spectacularly. I am impressed. Really. Thank you for giving it a chance.
Karla this is fantastic! You outdid yourself with this gem! Isn't it weird, I had planned mine for tonight too;-) Yours is better and on a different subject!;-) Kudo's to you my friend!
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WOWEE, WOW, WOW!!!!!!! This is absolutely spectacular! Very well done; you have mastered Jerry's style of writing perfectly in meter, form, and rhyme! BRAVA!!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. (Hey, I rhymed! LOL I did a poem! NEENER, NEENER, NEENER! LOL)
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Well done !
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