Haiku (5/7/5): Orange (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on April 18, 2006

tasty haiku, Karla...
love and peace, Carole

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on April 17, 2006

I can smell it Karla. Nothing like the smell of a fresh orange.
Susan

Reviewed by m j hollingshead

Reviewed on April 17, 2006

well done

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on April 17, 2006

Now you are making me hungry for an Orange LOL. Keep up the great writing and be blessed in doing so
GOd Bles
Michelle!

Reviewed by Nordette Adams

Reviewed on April 17, 2006

Brought a smile and a chuckle to this lady. ~~Nordette

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on April 17, 2006

Small ones are more juicy. Not sure bout oranges though...

Reviewed by Gordon Rosenberg (Reader)

Reviewed on April 17, 2006

juicy

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on April 17, 2006

Good for senryu too. I can just taste the sweetness.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on April 17, 2006

Yummy!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher

Reviewed on April 17, 2006

Great ku on the orange fruit!
Love, Birgit and Roger

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on April 17, 2006

my favorite fruit.......the work makes it worth it :)

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on April 17, 2006

Yes I do have to agree with Ed on this one, the orange is a very provocative fruit, ater peeling away the rind you have no way of knowing until you actually taste whether it will be sweet and juicy or sour and dry. Good poem makes one think.

Felix

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on April 17, 2006

Could have as well sexual conotations...ed

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on April 17, 2006

Oh Yes, what a lovely haiku Karla!

Reindeer

Reviewed by Safi Abdi

Reviewed on April 17, 2006

Love them, and you make them even more appetizing!
Safi

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on April 17, 2006

Karla
Very appetising and ap "pealing " pen...lols
Love
Peter

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on April 17, 2006

Excellent, Karla - think I'll have one now!

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on April 17, 2006

Wonderful haiku, Karla; very a"peal"ing. *grins* BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin sister, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by F William Broome

Reviewed on April 17, 2006

Only in the privacy of a bedroom, with a loved partner, would the peeling of an oragnge... be better! Great statement. Great word us. Love it! - Bill