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Compassion
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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Unexpected; sudden, this
sprinkle of rain falling
outside the window.  Of
course, it's not enough (it
never is), but we'll take any
we can get.  Dark splotches
lick the soil; the grass perks
with hope, temperatures
cool down from the blast
furnace levels they were.
Any change in the forecast
is better than nothing at
all; I'm grateful for the brief
respite ... tomorrow the heat
will  break me and make me talk.

(c) 2006, Karla Dorman.
 

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Reviewed on July 29, 2006
Love it, Karla, but not the heat! Tell Michelle, Regis, and the others who have cooler weather to send us some! *grins* Very well penned; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin sister, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed on July 29, 2006
This is a great write here my friend, we are finally getting some cooling relief here in California
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on July 28, 2006
Forget that guy Kostro, what does he know, it rains regularly in NJ, usually just after I wash my car...LOL,Ed

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on July 28, 2006
In Texas the arid conditions compromized with heat is a furnace that isn't conducive to helthy living. It is so easy for many to read your pen and say I understand when they haven't lived that type of hell. I can say that there is nothing delightful or redeeming when you take a breath and your lungs get seered from the heat. I've been there but only for a short time. I had a taste and that's all I needed.
I pray for all you Texans who endure these heated days and survive.
My prayers are with you all.
Susan

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on July 28, 2006
Very well done Karla, it must seem like you are being held captive and slowly tortured with the heat that envelops your area. I hate heat so I can sure sympathize with you.

Fee

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on July 28, 2006
Karla

I agree with Ed below completely..
We need someone do a rain dance soon..
There appears to be a drought all over..

Peter

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on July 28, 2006
When you talk you make sense....if I do I spit mud balls.....lols!!

Hope your day will be cooler!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)
Reviewed on July 28, 2006
Oh yes, Karla...the elements do work their wonders on us poets,
don't they?
I enjoyed this.

Reviewed by Susan Sonnen
Reviewed on July 28, 2006
I'm with Ed...I love the mystery in the last line!

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on July 28, 2006
tomorrow the heat

will break me and make me talk.



Very Mysterious, Karla! Now I wonder what it will make you say? And we really don't seem to be getting enough rain - anywhere, these days. We should all start doing a Rain Dance.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on July 28, 2006
I pray that more refreshing rain will come your way, Karla. Love and peace to you,

Regis


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