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T.R.A.P.P.E.D.
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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I'm fine...just so t i r e d of the heat!


Trapped in
the claustrophobic grip
of heat;
heavy hands slowly squeeze
the life
out of the atmosphere

and I
am left gasping for air.

Trapped by
the blue monotony
of sky;
the sun ties down the clouds
and sears
my retinas with gold

and I
stumble about blindly.

Trapped in
a molten pattern of
torture;
restrained by lack of rain,
I die
as slowly as the grass

and blend
into the pavement.

(c) 2006, Karla Dorman. 

 

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Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on August 9, 2006
It sure seems like the ultimate meltdown this most heated summer, Karla.

Reviewed on August 9, 2006
I am glad the heatwave here in Cali has broken, I hope it stays away, but I could relate to this a couple of weeks ago, thank you for sharing
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by Chanti Niven
Reviewed on August 8, 2006
Oh and how I can relate to this. Recently temperatures in this area soared to 119 degrees F, a record. I literally felt as though I were being cooked alive. Am I relieved that it has cooled down somewhat. It sounds to me like you're experiencing a heat wave there now. An excellent poem that expresses it so well.
Chanti

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on August 8, 2006
the heat can certainly melt one down ... you captured its stiffling repercussions quite effectively, Karla ... hopefully, you'll cool off soon ...

Reviewed by Susan Sonnen
Reviewed on August 8, 2006
ooh, such sharp imagery, Karla! very intense wording...you described your experience with this heat perfectly!

Reviewed by H. Lena Jones
Reviewed on August 8, 2006
Wait...my dear friend, Karla...do not let this brazen heat defeat you yet...sing, dance, think pleasant thoughts like snow, salt, and minus 45 degree temperatures...soon to come, my beloved friend...wait for one last winter blast before declaring the end!

Okay...just trying to make you smile with my bit of dramatization :)
Relief will soon come. Hang in there...write more poems.

God Bless
Lena

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on August 8, 2006
My goodness ! Your pen describes our heat here too. For some reason it seems that Texas has turned into an inferno. Bless you and your sister and hang in there a little longer. God won't let us down dearest!
love and peace,
Susan

Reviewed by Henry Lefevre
Reviewed on August 8, 2006
Hi Karla:

Good poem. I can appreciate the problems Texas must provide.

Hank

Reviewed by Rhonda Galizia
Reviewed on August 8, 2006
KARLA...THIS IS ANOTHER OF YOUR INCREDIBLY GIFTED WRITES!
I HAVE SO MUCH EMPATHY FOR YOU...WE ACTUALLY HAD ROADS THAT WERE MELTING - LAST WEEK, I THINK IT WAS! YESTERDAY, THE HEAT AND THE HUMIDITY WERE SO INTENSE, WHEN I STEPPED OUTSIDE TO LET MY CATS OUT, THE AIR PRESSURE FELT AS IF IT WOULD BURST MY SKULL!
WE DID GET A WEE POCKET OF RAIN LAST NIGHT THAT LASTED JUST A FEW MOMENTS...BUT IT WAS ENOUGH TO DROP THE TEMP AND THE HUMIDITY DOES NOT EQUAL THE DEW POINT, TODAY! WAHOO!


I WISH I COULD SEND YOU A BIG SUPPLY OF ITALIAN ICE, KARLA! I SOAK HANDKERCHIEFS AND THEN TIE THEM AROUND MY HEAD [HIPPIE BEANIE STYLE] AND I SIT WITH MY FEET IN A BOWL OF COLD WATER - IT WORKS! KEEPS THE EXTREMITIES COOL IN THE SUMMER, JUST LIKE COVERING THEM KEEPS THEM WARM IN, IN THE WINTER...IT DOES LOOK GOOFY, BUT THAT, TOO, HELPS, BECAUSE WHEN YOU LAUGH AT YOURSELF, YOU FORGET THE HEAT - MOMENTARILY!


BTW, IT'S REAL HOT IN OHIO, TOO, AND MY DAUGHTERS AND GRANDSONS ARE MOVING TO COLUMBUS ON THURSDAY.
I HOPE YOU DON'T MIND I USE CAPS - IT'S EASIER ON MY BRAIN SOMETIMES..YOU CAN ALWAYS REMOVE THIS AFTER READING IT, KIDDO! LOVE&HUGS, Rhonda

Reviewed on August 8, 2006
You have described the way one feels in this heat very well. Just don't blend into the pavement too well :),
Love and (cold)hugs, B&R

Reviewed by Sue Hess
Reviewed on August 8, 2006
karla, you summed up my feelings lately perfectly. there are times i feel like i'm walking thru some kind of syrup, the air is so thick from the heat.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on August 8, 2006
Awwwww...this even made me feel the heat....B L O W I N G some rain your way O K A Y !!

Love Tinka

Reviewed on August 8, 2006
Heat just comes and goes but Karla stays tough and strong. Well expressed situation of heat

Reviewed on August 8, 2006
Karla~

How well you have described the heat. OW. The part about the retinas made mine burn! LOL Very well done, Karla; you are getting better and better at your poetry! Keep up the fantastic job; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin sister, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on August 8, 2006
Karla

Hang Tough

Blessings

Peter

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on August 8, 2006
You are so dramatic
lol
and I love it!!!
never change.......your writes entertain.......even when you are not in a happy place.....you are so talented in expression....
I hope you take this as a compliment

hot stuff!
lol
pax A


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