Suddenly, or Presto-Chango! (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on August 10, 2006

Powerful my friend, I look forward to reading more I am praying that you get a reprive from the heat write on and be blessed
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on August 10, 2006

Karla,

Excellent write; very well penned! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin sister, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on August 10, 2006

I love the dual meaning and symbolism of this poem, Karla. May you soon get renewing rain. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on August 10, 2006

Oh candles do light up our rmantic lives.....lol!!

You are a bright one Karla!!

Sorry could not resist!!

Hope cooler weather will come soon!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Joyce Hale

Reviewed on August 10, 2006

Excellent, Karla!! I love it!!

Peace. Joyce

Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green

Reviewed on August 10, 2006

TOO good. H O T !!!! ;D Really, this is excellent. Amazing how
much more effective a short poem can be than one that goes on and
. . .whoa. Talkin' most a mine. . .eek. Gotta go stand in fronta
the air vent. Prob'ly turn the AC down a notch. LOVE YOU, Pea in
Carolina where the temperature is 88, heat index 100+ :_

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on August 10, 2006

Ain't it the truth! Oi Vey!

Reviewed by Connie Hinnen Cook (Reader)

Reviewed on August 10, 2006

Boy! This one really nails it on the head!
However, here you'd have to add a wet blanket
on top of it all. :(
Great write, Karla!

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on August 10, 2006

You better get a squirt gun or a bucket of water to douse that flame, Karla.

Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher

Reviewed on August 9, 2006

Karla, this could be your best "hot" poem! Great write,
love and hugs, B&R

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on August 9, 2006

When the national weather map shows Texas, Arizona and Neveda in a white color...that's seething and just plain old uncomfortable. My raindance is for you and all you hot people. My prayers are with you and nature...for rain!!!

Love,
Susan

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on August 9, 2006

Karla I love the imagery fantastic to capture it in cuch succinct verse! the sign of a true poet! Brava!I pray it gets cooler for you guys!ET

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on August 9, 2006

Karla

You need a cool refreshing shower...and then a nice cappochino...;)

Blessings

Peter

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg

Reviewed on August 9, 2006

Ley us hope and pray that this terrible heat, in your neck of the woods, finally finds another outlet.

Karla, you and Karen stand strong!

In fraternity ...

Richard Lloyd Cederberg

Reviewed by Aberjhani

Reviewed on August 9, 2006

Wow! This reads as much like an experience of spiritual enlightenment as it does like a testimony on the current heat wave. Takes a talented poet to make something so tangible on multiple levels. Hope you get some rain on the physical one:-)
Aberjhani

Reviewed by Susan Sonnen

Reviewed on August 9, 2006

get out of there fast!!!! you are fantastic at describing intense events/emotions...good job!

Susan