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Wounded in Action
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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Shame, how the Veterans are being treated...reminds me of Vietnam.

You laugh, bitterly;
anger lingering
in the throat like fur,
as you question who
the real enemy
is - is it them?  You??
Does anyone give
a damn as you watch
buddies cut down by
the sharpened swords of
insurgents seeking
your head on a plate?
Does anyone hear
the screams of !!outrage!!
as the media
calls you terrorist,
camouflaged to stand
out like a sore thumb?
Does no one come to
your defense as you
battle to the edge
of sanity and
life, a terrible,
honorable cost?
Don't cry, Warrior:
you are in my heart
and prayer, constantly.
Know your sacrifice
is worth my freedom,
and I am grateful.

(c) 2006, Karla Dorman.  (9/25)


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 Reviews of "Wounded in Action"
Reviewed by Rhonda Galizia
Reviewed on September 27, 2006
Amen!

Karla, Thank you for putting into perfect words, the outrage, which lies, so embedded in my heart! My brother was spit on, coming home from Nam...now these precious men and women rarely get a thank you.

Hmmm...if we don't stop it there, it could turn.....and come back to our shore, again. Will these same Valiant Warriors be welcomed THEN?

Reviewed by CJ Heck
Reviewed on September 27, 2006
Well said, Karla. As a Vietnam widow, I feel your words all the way down to my soul. Thank you for your meaningful poem.
Many hugs and respect,
CJ

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on September 26, 2006
Nicely said.
Those hairy little bastards should be buried in the cesspool they've created.

Elizabeth

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on September 26, 2006
unfortunately, as far as the the gov't treating it's vetrans, history repeats itself ...

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on September 26, 2006
I has dinner with a couple of my dearest friend. they have a two year old son. The father/husband said..."I'd go to Iran. I want to go. I want to let the fire in me respond to the indignity the Iraqis have caused and I want to fight for my great grand father, my grandfather and father and I want to fight for the freedom for my small son and if I were to die then I died doing what all my forefather's died for and my son and his son would die for if they have a chioce. One day...they may not have that priveledge."

It IS all about having a great country, freedom and harmony.

I learned a lot about my friends and what they believe in and why we are free and the cost of that freedom. I am very proud of this family tonight.
Love,
Susan

Reviewed by Myrna Badgerow
Reviewed on September 26, 2006
My son-in-law returned from Irag almost a year ago.. whole? Perhsps phyxically but emotionally.. no. I've learned and seen much in the past year.. some has not been pretty. Keep saying it, Karla!

Myrna

Reviewed by J M (Reader)
Reviewed on September 26, 2006
I feel Vetrans have always received the unfair act on them and I am so glad you penned this poem.....

Reviewed on September 26, 2006
Karla I agree this is sickening, they are fighting to defend our country, and they are being treated as if they are nothing more than a clump of dirt to be kicked around, I for one respect our soldiers, and will support them in anyway I can.
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on September 26, 2006
Emotional write Karla!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Sue Hess
Reviewed on September 26, 2006
this is an exceptionally well written and true piece...we all need to remember them daily

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on September 26, 2006
Isn't it a shame that past heroics are so quickly forgotten? Ungrateful but they shine. Victor

Reviewed on September 26, 2006
My prayers and gratitude have been answered two fold as two of mine have gone to war twice and returned whole. I pray for mine and all in harms way and am pained by those who have made the ultimate sacrifice. I hate the war but not our childen who are fighting for the luxury of dissent I enjoy. Excellent write Karla. Peace, blessings, and gratitude for sharing and caring. <Mikii>

Reviewed by Dove JoAnne Cromp (Reader)
Reviewed on September 26, 2006
dearest, this was so powerful and emotional....true, true, true---

love,
dove

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on September 26, 2006
Well formulated with a recipe that offers the tribute to the soldier who braves the battle to keep the homeland save. Well said Karla..

Fee

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on September 26, 2006
I hope and pray this can be improved. I have signed petitions on it.
Superb lament Karla, thanks for sharing!...ET

Reviewed by Connie Faust
Reviewed on September 26, 2006
Karla, this is absolutely beautiful!
We need to pray for them. God performs some awesome miracles in times of war. We can pray that He will do it for these warriors, and that they will recognize His hand and feel His presence.
Great poem!
Love,
Connie

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on September 26, 2006
Karla ...

Right where the rubber meets the road. Excellent!

It is something that I have never understood - why veterans are treated with such aloofness, and often contempt. If these radical opinionists were put into a similar scenario, (war) they would not be so outspoken against those who sacrifice for their country and our freedoms.

Richard Lloyd Cederberg

Reviewed on September 26, 2006
Karla,

We have to fight; that is what the military teaches its soldiers, and to not be able to fight back only makes us sitting ducks. Hard hitting, sobering reminder; thanks for penning this powerful wake-up call! Very well done; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin sister, Karen Lynn. :(

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on September 26, 2006
Karla

History will be the guardian of the utterly selfless sacrifices made by our heroic forces in harm's way..

Splendid appreciation of our armed forces who are operating in the most extreme and hostile of conditions

God Bless

Peter

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on September 26, 2006
Shame, how the Veterans are being treated...reminds me of Vietnam...

Sadly, me too, Karla - and it seems we never learn, even our own government.


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