300 Game (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Rhonda Galizia

Reviewed on October 24, 2006

GLORIOUS COMPOSITION, KARLA!!! OUTSTANDING!!

SAVING IT!
Love, Rhonda

Reviewed by Daring Sunshine

Reviewed on October 17, 2006

You share so deep & wide with so few words-excellent!
Peace, Grace, Love,
Sharon

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on October 17, 2006

Excellent work Karla!!

Love tinka

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on October 17, 2006

With God, you CAN'T lose! Great stuff, Karla; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin sister, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Phillip William Allen

Reviewed on October 17, 2006

He alway's bowls a 300 game. WTG Karla

Reviewed by Joyce Hale

Reviewed on October 17, 2006

Excellent, Karla, excellent. I love the analogy.

Peace. Joyce

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on October 17, 2006

Rain is good...thunder, exciting...nice poem, Karla.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Kay P Devenish

Reviewed on October 17, 2006

You make sure you stay out of that lightning dear lady.Send some of that rain over here w are having a drought with water restrictions.
I love the poem
Best wishes always
from
kay

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on October 17, 2006

Zeus is playing with fire?
Hey send some of that water over here. We're under drought orders..

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on October 17, 2006

This is a great write here Karla, keep it up and be blessed
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on October 16, 2006

Love it when you write about the storms. Glad to hear you got some rain. We too are finally getting moisture......only for this 24 hours it is snow.

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)

Reviewed on October 16, 2006

We too had a lot of rain, and we need it. V

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on October 16, 2006

a downpour of creativity from within this poetic storm ... excellent poem, Karla ...

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on October 16, 2006

And now its heading towards the northeast, thanks loads, Karla...! Ed

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on October 16, 2006

Perfect poem for a perfect game! outstanding metaphor!

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on October 16, 2006

Karla:

You have described the storm so beautifully!!!

Well-done!!!

Sandie Angel a.k.a. Sandie May Angel :o)

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on October 16, 2006

Ah Karla, this is excellent! Love the way you describe the storm!

Reindeer

Reviewed by Dove JoAnne Cromp (Reader)

Reviewed on October 16, 2006

You and your sis both have something STRONGLY to do with weather..Wow!!!

Love,
Dove

Reviewed by CJ Heck

Reviewed on October 16, 2006

Karla, this is brilliant! I love how you've compared the storm with a game of bowling! Again, brilliant, my friend.
Much love,
CJ

Reviewed by Rusty Daily

Reviewed on October 16, 2006

What a beautiful and unique play on words.
Rusty

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on October 16, 2006

I love a storm and the noisier the better. It's as though a school classroom of children are romping in the classroom while the teacher stepped out for a minute. Storms are wonderful nourishment for the earth and the passions of man.
Love,
Susan

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on October 16, 2006

Karla

Manna from heaven...

Hallelujah !!!

Blessings

Peter