If you could only know, Karla.......a sax was playing low notes while I read this!

Very graphic, excellent!

Love&Hugs, Rhonda

Well written ....M

Excellent visuals in this, Karla!
Take care,
Sherry

The storm is a restless wanderer, constantly growling for it is lost.

Wow!!!!! What a wonderful way to describe "Storm"!!!!! A well-penned piece, Karla!!!!!!

Sandie Angel a.k.a. Sandie May Angel :o)

This is so sad and to often ..true. Short but oh so passionate!

Yes this touched me aswell...well done Karla!!

love Tinka

I would say it is a slave to the winds. Beautiful imagery. Victor

Wonderful

This is a great write here, keep it up
God Bless
Michelle~

Yeah, and heads towards the northeast, AGAIN! You gotta keep this wet weather down there where you need it, we don't want it...lol, Ed (& Rufuz HATES being wet)

Being alone is terrible, but you know what is worse...when you are with people all the time and you still feel alone. Been there before. This is a wonderful write, I love animals and feel compelled to buy them cheeseburgers or a pack of bologna or a can of dog food, I can't sleep at night if I think they are wondering hungry, I could never understand how one human being can pass up another human in need, how do people sleep at night or live with their self? You have penned a terrific write gives one much to think about. I enjoy all of your work....keep writing I'll keep reading.
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling

Quite interesting analogy here.. although today's storm could have implored all day and no one would have invited it... Nice work here!

Myrna

Nice analogy, Karla. You've got me yearning for a bit of a storm here. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Wonderful similarities presented in this one Karla and it paints such a vivid image of the essence of a storm as well.

Fee

Lucky for us the storm is a homeless wanderer!! Excellent, Karla!!

Peace. Joyce

Such a sorrowful word picture you have painted Karla! Very touching with images that hurt the heart...Well done!

Love,
Eileen

As always, this too will pass! Ain't that the truth!
Karla, I'm always intrigued by what you write...you have a knack of drawing your readers in. Clever!

God Bless
Love and hugs
Lena

Ah, you are feeling melencholy, no?
No matter what you write...it is always a pleasure to read.

Elizabeth

Must be the tail-end of the storm you have in mind here, Karla... great metaphor and hope that that Black Dog continues to slink away, even if it is somewhat reluctantly and growling and grumblin as it goes... Very compassionate for one who has a dread fear of its teeth!! :)) LOL K xx

AAaawwww This TOUCHED ME!!!!!

Love, Dove

This reminds me of my past and how I felt being homeless in the cold all alone and pregnant but thanks be to God i am no longer in that position.

Geee Karla you are so gifted a storm and this is so wonderful.. I alwayslove the weather reports where they say bad bad and then it passes over.



Wonderful work Poetess.

Love, Light,

Joselyn

Karla

I like Dr Lilly's take on this below..
This could be seen as the allegorical tale of The Prodigal Son !

God Bless

Peter

Brilliant way to think about a storm. I never have viewed it as anything but a negative and you made it real and vulnerable. EXCELLENT!

I love this, Karla. Your metaphor of a storm being like a dog is wonderful! I loved this.
Love,
CJ

Karla, you have an uncanny way of painting a situation with your words. Slendid.
Rusty