E a s e m e n t (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on October 26, 2006

Understanding relief. Gooooooooooooooooooood Point Made in such few words; amazing!
Peace&Grace,
Sharon

Reviewed on October 26, 2006

A great personification of the bus. I can almost hear "him/her" sigh. Nicely done. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed on October 25, 2006

Hey Karla, that's clever. Can be interpreted on several levels. For instance, a pregnant woman finally giving birth...dropping her load, as it were! She would feel relief, right? Well done! :)

God Bless
LOL
Lena

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on October 25, 2006

Wonderful how you give the school bus a voice and with accuracy as well.
Love,
susan

Reviewed by Susan Sonnen

Reviewed on October 25, 2006

this one made me smile~ (:

Susan

Reviewed by J M (Reader)

Reviewed on October 25, 2006

Humor Oh Karla this is good.

Light & peace,
Joselyn

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on October 25, 2006

This is a great write here Karla, keep it up and be blessed
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by Myrna Badgerow

Reviewed on October 25, 2006

Our buses aren't kidless long enough between loads for much relief I don't think..lol I know the drivers need more in between...) Cute write!
Myrna

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on October 25, 2006

Sooo well done, Karla. Says it all visually as well as syllabically. As Victor says, sounds like an exhausted mother putting her feet up with a well-earned cup of tea for 5 minutes peace and quiet. Conjures much with a few well-placed words. TY K xx

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)

Reviewed on October 25, 2006

With all the children jumping up and down, no wonder the bus need relief. Must have been painful. Victor

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on October 25, 2006

Must have read Ed's sitting on the bog one first, then these metaphors..

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg

Reviewed on October 25, 2006

Karla ...

This could very well be an advertisement for a laxitive. Sometimes, I imagine, that full bus can feel like being constipated.

Goodun ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg

Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)

Reviewed on October 25, 2006

Human cargo is very heavy Karla. Lovely scenes and imageries.
You brother in Africa

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on October 25, 2006

After talking to Shiela, another writer on the den and also school bus driver I can surely appreciate this write.

Fee

Reviewed by Rusty Daily

Reviewed on October 25, 2006

Cute little life experience poem here. Empathetic to all bus drivers.
Rusty

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on October 25, 2006

Karla,

This is clever, original,and totally you! The words you come up with stirs the imagination! Very well done poem; take a bow! BRAVA, Karla!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin sister, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by CJ Heck

Reviewed on October 25, 2006

LOL, this piece has a lot of significance, Karla. My husband is retired from an Engineering career and drives a school bus! I'll have to print this out for him. The relief belongs to the driver, not the bus, rest assured! Excellent poem!
Love,
CJ

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on October 25, 2006

If i were the bus, I would quit...ed

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on October 25, 2006

Yes! As a former school bus driver, in a life long ago, you just gave me a most vivid flashback, Karla!

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on October 25, 2006

Karla

Felt a big weight getting lifted off my mind reading this..;-)
Highly original and imaginative composition

Bravo

Peter