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World of Hurt
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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Shame how we treat those who defend our shores...God bless our men and women who have ever put on a uniform for our freedoms. As a veteran, I salute and thank you.

"World of Hurt"
~~~~~~~~~~~
open their minds; see the world
of hurt, reminders of wounds
fresh from the battlefield and
return'd home, present'd in
g l a r i n g color, commercial-
free:  memories of dodging
bullets of death and pain, bombs
stash'd in vehicles, conceal'd
in clothing, roll'd thru doorways
to !! detonate !! their world
of hurt:  see it mirror'd in
hospital wards, in thousands
of eyes glaz'd with shock, purpl'd
hearts, fallen heroes, dying 
more and more each day, with their
tokens brought back from their world
of hurt:  see it when they come
home to red/white/blue shores of
angry protesters who know
n o t h i n g of sacrifice, of
being in a world of hurt...
it seems we've been here, before.

(c) 2006, Karla Dorman.  (10/26)


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 Reviews of "World of Hurt"
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on October 27, 2006
Beautiful rant Karla!!

God Bless those who care!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on October 27, 2006
Beautiful rant and of course you are right. Alas as you said: we've beenn there before. Victor

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on October 27, 2006
We have, and it's a damned shame; even our government doesn't give them their just due.

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on October 26, 2006
Yes, here before we have been & there again we will be...as is the world of man...e

Reviewed on October 26, 2006
Karla,

We ought to hang our heads in shame for how we treat our veterans who are only fighting to defend our freedom and way of life. If these protestors don't like it, send THEM to Iraq; let them fight! A powerful, call to arms; you made many vets appreciate the service you gave, and I salute you! BRAVA~

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin sister, Karen Lynn. :( >tears! <

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on October 26, 2006
I commend you for this write...I wonder if those who are protesting realize what would have or could have happened to America after the 9-11 attacks had our soldiers went over to protect us. I know I feel safer knowing that someone cares enough to volunteer thier life to protect ours...and you know that's the other thing, there hasn't been a draft, all of our soldiers are there by their choice. If they are not complaining why should anyone else. I agree with Lena...May God Bless those who care enough and love our country enough to fight for justice and freedom...again, I say a great and appropriate write.
God Bless America,
Joyce Bowling

Reviewed by H. Lena Jones
Reviewed on October 26, 2006
And it will only get worse, Karla, for man has not yet learned a thing about peace and love, and to attain it, they think of war! How foolish! Still, we must be ever grateful for those who gave their live to protect their land and us. May God bless those who fight for justice and freedom. Great write, K.

God Bless
LOL
Lena

Reviewed by Myrna Badgerow
Reviewed on October 26, 2006
What saddens me the most is the hurt that we can't see... that which doesn't show... great pen!

Myrna

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on October 26, 2006
Yep and these tragic deaths of terrorism reminds me of Viet Nam and the way women and children were used as fodder for the Communist cause.
Love,
Susan

Reviewed by J M (Reader)
Reviewed on October 26, 2006
A tribute worthy of those that die to protect us, lose so much family time , miss loved ones, for our safty this is strong powerful emotion expressed thank you God Bless those that serve us.....

Light & peace, Love,
Joselyn

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on October 26, 2006
A good solide write Karla that rings true no matter what country you reside in, I have watched wars come and go in my life time, and they are never pretty. The leaders make the decisions to go to war but it is the soldier, sailor and airmen who unquestionably pay the cost of it. It is also a sad fact that the average age of those who actually fight is 25 years old. Too young often to even be away from home but away they go in the name of freedom. These men and women earn the respect and thanks they are given or should be given by all

FEe

Reviewed by Susan Sonnen
Reviewed on October 26, 2006
yes, history is repeating itself. very good write, Karla. thank you.

Susan

Reviewed by Daring Sunshine
Reviewed on October 26, 2006
God bless all the men & woman who are protecting with diginity & love.
Peace&Grace,
Sharon

Reviewed by CJ Heck
Reviewed on October 26, 2006
A wonderful and truly patriotic write, Karla --
"All gave some, some gave all."
Bless you.
Love,
CJ

Reviewed on October 26, 2006
Karla
This is the sad truth! I heard of the protests and how the military men and women were treated when my uncle retunred from Vietnam, a world of difference from when my Grandfather returned from World War Two
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on October 26, 2006
Karla

This is so true..
We seem to be living in parallel universes these days, polarized right down the middle..

Love

Peter

Reviewed by Dove JoAnne Cromp (Reader)
Reviewed on October 26, 2006
So moving and TRUE. I will pray for my heros, YES THEY ARE OUR HEROS!!! I had no idea Karla you are a veteran. I so thank you for defending our country...This shocks and angers me sometimes at the treatment of our REAL heros...Thank you Karla. I hope many will join me in prayer..

Love & Peace,
Dove

Reviewed by Rusty Daily
Reviewed on October 26, 2006
This is a great tribute for those who would stand in harm's way. I tip my white hat to you.
Rusty


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