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Not Funny
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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Shame, shame, shame on Senator Kerry for taking a jab at our men and women in the military. As a veteran, I take offense; as a veteran himself, he should have just shut. His. Mouth. Nothing funny about making jokes about our military, intentional or otherwise.

And he wants to be Commander-in-Chief. Now, that's funny....

The silence is death.
It comes each day with its shock....
                                                        From THE SILENCE, Anne Sexton

"Not Funny"

Another one dead; another hero
laid to rest; while we at home
gripe about the numbers; the rising cost;
we protest; we bitch and moan

about the war; laugh at jokes about them
(uneducated; dumb ass
just following orders, "Yes, Sir, Yes, SIR!!");
and my tears fall on the grass...

sacrifice means nothing?  they died in vain??
and nobody gives a shit--
another one dead; another one gone;
ya know, I just don't get it.

(c) 2006, Karla Dorman (11/1)


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 Reviews of "Not Funny"
Reviewed on November 5, 2006
I dont' get it either Karla but, We must not give UP Hope! Many want to be there and are NOT forced! They have decided to allow US a Freedom, they know not of! Now that is a Sacrifice we have on our minds daily! Great Poem and to the point, OUCh - that hurt... Leaders must be Leaders and not follow what they - THINK - Others would want! Breatheeeeeeee Karla - Take 10... Keep Writing! Warm HuGs, Sheeeoxo

Reviewed by H. Lena Jones
Reviewed on November 2, 2006
Wow! Passionate! Sometimes you have to wonder at those who want to lead!
Well said, Karla!

LOL
Lena

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on November 2, 2006
You go girl!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed on November 2, 2006
Karla I don’t know if Senator Kerry knew about it but there was a joke along these lines which goes like this:

A general was giving a walk to his dog and in a nearby garden he saw a man reading a newspaper. He came too close to the man and told to his dog “read books like this and you shall become a writer like this man" The man retorted" yes dog, your master is right. Make yourself educated as you will otherwise become a general like him" I think origin of the joke is Arabic. So please take it just a joke and not an offence to the American military in war with the Iraqis or the Afghans or in other places of the world.

Your brother Abdi-Noor


Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on November 2, 2006
Karla

I gotta agree

God Bless

Peter

Reviewed on November 2, 2006
I aagree with Victor's comment. I am not politically inclined, but I think those who sacrifices of their country should be commended for their braveries.

Sandie Angel a.k.a. Sandie May Angel :o)

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on November 2, 2006
There will always be callousnous and political assholes Karla who have little or no respect for the sacrifices made by the sons and daughters of freedom. We can not let this provoke us though because for every one of them there are hundreds and thousands of patriots who shed tears and pray prayers for the men of the Armed Services.

Fee

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on November 2, 2006
This is a powerful write. I am not from US and would not interfere, but anyone who belittles a soldier doing his duty is a cad. He should not be allowed to run for president. Victor

Reviewed by Cynth'ya Reed
Reviewed on November 1, 2006
Whenever America stops name calling, and starts treating people like people instead of political symbols; when right is right and wrong is wrong and Osama becomes a priority instead of a missing excuse; when people understand that war is a result of Cain killing Abel, and that in any war NO DEATH IS GOOD; and that there will only be peace in heaven, then maybe this nation will stop dividing itself because God is no respector of persons, and there will be nothing in the end but souls in heaven or in hell. That's the most important thing. . . salvation of the soul, not saving face, nor throwing mud in the face of anyone. Let those without sin cast the first stone. Politics be damned.

Reviewed on November 1, 2006
That comment made me mad, I try to look at both sides of the story but in this case I know their was nothing but ignorance and hate in his words, keep up the great writing
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by Dove JoAnne Cromp (Reader)
Reviewed on November 1, 2006
YEAY!!!!!!!!! I saw it..SHAME ON HIM!!!!!!!!

Reviewed by Rhonda Galizia
Reviewed on November 1, 2006
Heart-powered lament, Karla! And I concur with you 100%..to say he is a jackass ...well, that IS his party's symbol! Think BALAAM :)

Personally, I believe the Lord ALLOWED him to get caught in his own devises - and right before Elections!!!

He is a fraud and a phony, and he is also married to Teresa Heinz - out of Pittsburgh - which is only 30 miles from me! She is nuts, too - and she has her DECEASED CONSERVATIVE HUSBAND, JOHN HEINZ' FORTUNE to support Scary-Kerry with!

He did irreparable damage to the Viet Nam Vets - and now, those serving in Iraq....

HE WILL EAT THE FRUIT OF HIS OWN WORDS, Karla!

God bless our Troops and Allies and all those people who WANT our Military to fight for their freedom! And God bless you and every other Vet who ever served at all!

Reviewed by J M (Reader)
Reviewed on November 1, 2006
This is powerful Karla I am in total agreement on his questionable Cheif of Military......
Bless you for this one..

Light Hugs,
Joselyn

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on November 1, 2006
John Kerry is a jerk. He isn't fit to be a president much less a soidier in the fine military of this brave country. Has he ever been able to be called brave?
thank you for allowing my vent.
love,
Susan

Reviewed by Rusty Daily
Reviewed on November 1, 2006
In reality, the armed services is statistically more intelligent than the general population. And of course, Kerry is a pig. IMHO

Reviewed on November 1, 2006
Maybe those who feel the need to make fun of our troops need to go to
Iraq and fight the war on terror themselves? Better yet, how about sending John Kerry, Rush Limbaugh, and all those other people who have no business poking fun at our President or our government, or better yet, our military? Send the troops back home and let these clowns fight the war. Powerfully angry, much needed vent; I feel the same way you do, Karla! Very well expressed, and your anger/bitterness is very well justified.

God bless our men and women who are giving their lives or sacrifices to ensure our freedoms; may they forever be strong, and may God watch out over them!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin sister, Karen Lynn. :( >tears! <


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