Numb with pain, I shuffle, the weight of the world heavy on my shoulders. It's been there so long, it's imbedded in my ankles; my spine is bowed. It's a hard, hard life ...
YOU feel it too huh! Keep the Hope dear Angel! I am still trying too! Let us Pray! She explained the pain of wanting and longing and caring so well in these HARD few lines! Warm HuGs, Sheee
I hope the heavy burden is gone from you; I am praying for a Healing Touch from God on you. Hang in there; things have GOT to get better! Just trust in the Lord and believe; that is all it takes! Very well done poem; expresses your mood perfectly! BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D
Reviewed by J M (Reader)
Reviewed on November 3, 2006
Life is Hard this one small but packed a punch..........
Light & peace,
HUGS
Yes Karla it is and the only thing that can possibly lighten the load in this world is love. Love of children, husbands, wifes, mothers fathers even love of God. Love is the answer and love helps us bear the load...and I know you have lots of love to call on.
Dearest Karla, It is not right that you should bear the weight of the world upon your lovely shoulders. Far too heavy, for a mere mortal. No wonder it bows the spine and pains the ankles. We are not meant to carry such a strain. So, cast it off to the Lord. He is able to carry the load.
Having said that, this was another clever write! :)
Amen sister...I too feel the pain within my ankles this week, and my shoulders are drooped a bit low. It is a hard, hard life...but together we can be over comers...I'll pray for you...you pray for me, sometimes it helps to switch loads. I just thought of a song that a friend sings..."He's an on time God" so let's hang on, pray hard, and wait on him to come by our way.
Blessings to you,
Joyce Bowling
Feel every ounce of this, Karla. But you have the Atlas spirit and can soar above the great burden of pain when you think Poetry!! I do understand just how hard it is to maintain energy levels against continual knawing discomfort and the fatigue and gloom it constantly ushers in with it. Fix yourself a good hot bath and burn some fragrance and settle back with some wonderful literature... that should both relax away the aches and agonies and uplift the spirit. I KNOW you will be free once you have hit on the next moment's inspiration. May you be blessed with sleep that brings refreshment and rest. Love and prayers. K xx Wonderful pilgrim write! :))
I want to give you a long gentle warm sisterly hug and then make you a nice cup of English breakfast tea.You don't deserev pain sweet poet,dear lady,keep believing tomorrow will be better,it will happen,God has the power,you are in my prayers Karla.
Love and best wishes always to you and yours
from
Kay.
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A further collection of poems, many from years in the Middle East, but also the California San Francisco and Central Coast areas (Santa Cruz, Carmel, Big Sur, Berkeley, etc.).
"The Lord upholds all those who fall, and raises up all those that be bowed down." Psalm 145:14
Love&Hugs&Prayers, Rhonda
Regis
I hope the heavy burden is gone from you; I am praying for a Healing Touch from God on you. Hang in there; things have GOT to get better! Just trust in the Lord and believe; that is all it takes! Very well done poem; expresses your mood perfectly! BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D
Light & peace,
HUGS
Love tinka
Fee
Having said that, this was another clever write! :)
God Bless
LOL
Lena
Blessings to you,
Joyce Bowling
Carmen
But the strongest are our prayers..
Love,
Sharon
Rusty
Love and best wishes always to you and yours
from
Kay.
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God Bless
Michelle~
Peter