Hear you're curious: You haven't seen me In a while and have Been wondering where I am. Been here all Along, right under Your nose. I'm surprised You didn't see me, That you didn't trip Over my body.
Okay Karla, I gotta say this one leaves me curious. At first, I was thinking "lips"... Perhaps a subtle message to hubby to make use of them...but then the "body" showed up! Oh well, never been much good at solving puzzles... :) Having admitted that, I must say you have penned an interesting and clever poem!
Oh, hang on, just had a thought! Does this body happen to have a very large tummy which gets in the way of the lips, perhaps? :)
Karla excellent is sometimes an inadequate description but his piece is EXCELLENT. Peace, love, blessings and gratitude(PLB&G) for caring and sharing. Transparent I think not, perhaps some are just blind. Stay beautiful it's the greatest revenge against wrongdoers. <LOVE> Mikii
Reviewed by J M (Reader)
Reviewed on November 3, 2006
Transparency is wonderful expressed so well Karla I feel transparent at times and they step on my feet.......:(
Sometimes what we think we have lost is right under our noses. This write reminds me of all the people I know that suffer from "tunnel vision" and continually complain that they're not getting what they need and its right there in their clenched fist.
Light and Wisdom and thankyou ...
Richard Lloyd cederberg
It is a good thing we can understand and use the edge of words to strike back at ones who have wrongged us and this work definately does that. Sharp like a sword it cuts to the very source of your anger.
The folks who we take for granted tend to be the ones that get overlooked. It is the thorns in the flesh that grab our headlines and take up our headlights.
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on November 3, 2006
But I was waiting behind the bike shed, been here six months, may need a bath..
Don't know if you meant for this to be a humorous write, but I serious a serious side. Some people see so much in themselves it is difficult for them to see and appreciate all the qualities in others.
Rusty
I love your spunk and attitude. You may feel invisible at times, but trust me you are NOT. You are making an impact on the world with your writing, and you are certainly an inspiration to me. Very well done; brava! Take a bow, Karla; you deserve it!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin (and biggest fan), Karen Lynn. :D
Questions, unquestioned discoveries, and answers in parable and rhyme…. This collection records a journey starting with a 1960s retrospective and the first man on the moon, moving to a new millennium welcomed in with a terrorist spin, family crises,
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Peace&Grace,
Sharon
Oh, hang on, just had a thought! Does this body happen to have a very large tummy which gets in the way of the lips, perhaps? :)
God Bless
LOL
Lena
God Bless
Michelle~
sometimes not
good write
l&h
john+
Paul;-)
Regis
Love from a dove
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Susan
Hugs Lots Love,
Joselyn
How true - how true!
Sometimes what we think we have lost is right under our noses. This write reminds me of all the people I know that suffer from "tunnel vision" and continually complain that they're not getting what they need and its right there in their clenched fist.
Light and Wisdom and thankyou ...
Richard Lloyd cederberg
Fee
Love,
ET
Myrna
Rusty
I love your spunk and attitude. You may feel invisible at times, but trust me you are NOT. You are making an impact on the world with your writing, and you are certainly an inspiration to me. Very well done; brava! Take a bow, Karla; you deserve it!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin (and biggest fan), Karen Lynn. :D
Now we see you...now we don't...heh
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Peter