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Who Will Remember?
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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To those who have made the ultimate sacrifice. I will remember.

A soldier, dead.  I see it in
the way trees bow low, feel it in
the heaviness of the sky that
presses the shoulders down.  A
flag is triangled, presented
to grieving loved ones; "Taps" is played;
the coffin is lowered into
the ground.  Who will remember this,
other than Nature and myself?

(c) 2006, Karla Dorman (11/7)


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Reviewed by Marie Wadsworth
Reviewed on December 11, 2006
Applause. I am a Desert Storm veteran and I think any veteran would appreciate this. And so would those serving that are in harms way.
Blessings to you!

Reviewed on November 28, 2006
I can't forget and never will!
Great Powerful WRite here Karla!
GOD Bless the Soldier who is never Forgotten!
For trying his Best to give us all Our Freedom!
Warmest Blessings!
WArm HuGs,Sheee

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on November 16, 2006
I will remember!

Reviewed by Rhonda Galizia
Reviewed on November 13, 2006
Karla, this is like the fist-in-the-gut-truth-impact - MIGHTY!

I share your burden...and I promise you, I shall never forget either.

God bless you, Soldier.

Love&Respect, Rhonda

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on November 11, 2006
A powerful and timely message, Karla. Thank you for sharing it. Love and peace,

Regis

Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen
Reviewed on November 9, 2006
All lines lead to the last, Karla.

"other than Nature and myself?"

A very sad piece, I feel, for you, but, not, really. Most sad pieces remain in the soul.

Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen

Reviewed by Daring Sunshine
Reviewed on November 9, 2006
Excellent..Tears!
Love,
Sharon

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on November 8, 2006
Most poerful offering Karla!!

Love tinka

Reviewed by CJ Heck
Reviewed on November 8, 2006
"All gave some,
Some gave all."

As a Nam widow, I couldn't agree more with you, Karla. Thank you, thank you.
Love,
CJ

Reviewed by Myrna Badgerow
Reviewed on November 8, 2006
I have to ditto Susan de Vegter's comment... I remember!

Myrna

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on November 8, 2006
Who will remember this,
other than Nature and myself?

I truly hope many will.

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on November 8, 2006
the spirit of america will remember ...

Reviewed by Angel God is Love
Reviewed on November 7, 2006
Thanks very powerful and important to remember and support all we can.
Hugs Angela

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on November 7, 2006
The last farewell, probably put on TV for propaganda, and no shame at all. But we should all remember. Victor

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson
Reviewed on November 7, 2006
Karla, you've outdone yourself here. fantastic capture that bids us all remember and give what we can to support others. Dawn

Reviewed by Jo Janoski
Reviewed on November 7, 2006
Powerful! It puts a weight on the shoulders of all of us.

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on November 7, 2006
This is exactly why I gave the answer I did when someone asked me if I was driving in "this downpour" to vote. People die for the freedom I have to vote. It is disrespectful to not vote when they fight for MY right to do so!
Love and Peace.
Susan

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on November 7, 2006
Many will remember ,but too many don't! Excellent poem Karla, you really poured your soul into this.Thank you for your service!
Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on November 7, 2006
Wow! Karla this is beautiful and very powerful tribute that touches me deeply. I too feel that not enough honor and pay respect for those that have given the ultimate sacrifice with their lives in the line of duty to protect us. May God bless the families left behind, and may our Red, White, & Blue wave proudly as it always has in the past. Your a beautiful person Karla with much to give....
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling

Reviewed on November 7, 2006
Karla,

This powerful, angry piece shows your anger and frustration at the lack of support of our vets, which is very well justified. I feel the exact same way, and to those who are protesting the war, let THEM fight and send THEM to Iraq! Let them see what we are having to endure day after day; it may open their eyes! I am still hacked off at Sen. Kerry's inane comments; he makes me so mad!! Very well done, Karla; may the flag forever wave, and may people learn to appreciate the hard work our vets, past, present, and future, are putting into this war to ensure our freedoms! May God protect them, and may He open our eyes to see that they need all the help/support we can possibly give them!

Thanks for remembering our vets; may God bless you mightily, and thank you for your service; it was not in vain, and I consider you one of my biggest heroes! I love you, Soldier!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin sister, Karen Lynn. :( >tears! <

*SALUTE!*

Reviewed by H. Lena Jones
Reviewed on November 7, 2006
Wow! Powerful, Karla. Your tribute pulls at the heartstrings. This is not the end, though, for he has indeed left this life only to begin another with Jesus.

God Bless
LOL
Lena

Reviewed by Rusty Daily
Reviewed on November 7, 2006
Not enough Karla, not enough
Rusty

Reviewed by Jill Eisnaugle
Reviewed on November 7, 2006
A very powerful write, Karla. I am still livid over Sen. Kerry's comment. Our brave military men do a job that I, personally, am not brave enough to do and yet, they do not receive the pay or respect they so dearly deserve. I have always said even if you are against the war, you must support the troops who lay it all on the line, at times, for our freedom and way of life.

Thank you for this timely write, as we approach Veteran's Day weekend.

Jill

Reviewed on November 7, 2006
I will remember, I come from a military family myself, this is a beautiful write, one that I enjoyed thank you for this, and thank you for being you
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by J M (Reader)
Reviewed on November 7, 2006
Taps are played and a hero is laid to rest and Sweet Jesus heavenly host carry him home. This is powerful Karla,,,,,
Blessings, Hugs,
Joselyn


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