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Angels Wearing White
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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God bless the nurses, who took wonderful care of Karen when she was in the hospital.

This is one I wrote the day she had her tumor removal/colostomy.

Unease; betrayed by
a body gone horribly
wrong; masked buzzards keep
watch; those who think they know the
answers rely on
expensive machines to do
the work for them.  I
am at their mercy.  The
light of day blinks out
as I go under..........................and the
surgeon vanishes.
I do not see him again.
What I see when I
do wake up is nurses, those
angels wearing white,
hovering; always near; they
help my sick body
turn like butter in their
arms.  I rest on shots
of painkiller and in the
knowledge that I am
finally in a safe place;
I can sleep now, now
that I'm in their hands.

(c) 2006, Karla Dorman.  (12/1)

  

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 Reviews of "Angels Wearing White"
Reviewed by CJ Heck
Reviewed on January 7, 2007
This is so touching, Karla! They are as angels and this is such a lovely way to pay tribute to their care. Well done and I believe you should send a copy of this to the hospital floor Karen was on. They get far too little appreciation as it is and this would touch them deeply.
Love,
CJ

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on December 29, 2006
Yes many have survived because of the nurses and they make our stay more comfortable. Glad to here that she is okay :-)

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on December 29, 2006
i was a stuent nurse a long time ago ... not an easy job but a rewarding one ... fine tribute ...

Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on December 29, 2006
Excellent piece on the "Angels Wearing White"...my older daughter is a CCU nurse
peace and love, Carole

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on December 29, 2006
Excellent tribute to the Nurses. They are the ones who bring us back to health. Doctors do their work, but it is the nurse who keeps watch over us like the angels they truly are and makes sure that all of our needs are met.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on December 29, 2006
Wonderful tribute Karla!!

Thank God for those who care!!

love Tinka

Reviewed by J M (Reader)
Reviewed on December 29, 2006
Nurses are a very special breed, they if good ones, listen, comfort, pray un awares for you. They risk catching fatal diseases and a broken heart if they become close to you. They have hidden wings known to God. I am also thankful for the winged angelicv nurses that took careful care of sweet Karen. Thank you for posting this poem dedicated to them in white.

Blessed and Prosperous New Year 2007 With all that heaven has to offer for you and Karen.
Joselyn

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on December 29, 2006
Those angels in white truly do make a huge difference.

Reviewed by K. Mulroney
Reviewed on December 29, 2006
I do hope that your sister is doing better. This piece shares the fear of illness and the thankfulness of those that take of us. Little thanks they get for giving us the small comforts when we are at our weakest. Nicely done Karla!

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on December 28, 2006
You both deserve the very best and it sounds these nurses gave it to you...I too am happy and relieved as to Karen feeling better...Ed

Reviewed by Daring Sunshine
Reviewed on December 28, 2006
Such a nice tribute to those nurses; if you want to send them a copy- call me.

Peace&Grace,
Sharon

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on December 28, 2006
Such a true write and I too have rested many a night in the hospital because the smile of one or more nurses adn a few kind words.

Fee

Reviewed by H. Lena Jones
Reviewed on December 28, 2006
Accurate details, Karla. How well I remember my own surgery and the time spent in the recovery room. Yes, those nurses in white are angels of mercy...to be greatly appreciated. Great write!

Love and hugs
Lena

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on December 28, 2006
Fantastic tribute to the well deserved nurses Karla! Thank you for your loving support, and tell Karen my thoughts and prayers are now and have been with her. I will try to email her again. it didn't work...Love you both,
Eileen

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on December 28, 2006
my best friend is studying to be a nurse she will be fine this is a worthy tribute to people who are beyond what i could ever do... ...thank you, Karla. Love and peace,

Regis

Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero
Reviewed on December 28, 2006
Remarkable beings, aren't they, Karla. You've done a good job both in content and technique.

Carmen

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on December 28, 2006
Yes, nurses are often angels who help us in our survival battle. Victor

Reviewed by Dove JoAnne Cromp (Reader)
Reviewed on December 28, 2006
You angel..I love you both..

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on December 28, 2006
Karla, I hope this is not deemed insensitive to say, but I think this life-shattering/changing experience is taking your work to new levels and is producing some of your finest work. I know the price is too step and one not chosen to be paid, but at least therein is a silver lining, perhaps. Your every "hospital" write has me on the edge of my seat and I am constantly amazed by how your collect your thoughts in such potent ways at the time of this dire confusion and emotional turmoil. I have NEVER been to write of my own experiences in this way. I salute you, and your imagery here is surgical. May the Lord continue to bless you with strength and resource and Karen with grace and healing. You make an amazing pair and a living testimony to life, love, faith and friendship. A very Happy New Year, and a very special one, to you both. LOL K xx

Reviewed on December 28, 2006
Karla this is beautiful, write on and be blessed in the writing
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed on December 28, 2006
Beautiful tribute to the angels in white; God bless the nurses who work tirelessly to restore health to the sick! Very well done, Karla; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin sister, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on December 28, 2006
OH this is beautiful...I only had the colonoscopy this summer and I felt much safer when I awoke from the test with the caring nurses gathered around, only my nurses were wearing Pooh scrubs...nice tribute to those nurses who care for us when we are sick...I just had a routine checkup, turned out okay...a little divertickulitus...hope I spelled that one okay...but anyway great tribute and so glad that you are back at the den...missed you and thankful you are recovering and going to be okay, prayer does change things, doesn't it. Enjoyed this one much.
Blessings for the upcoming year,
Joyce Bowling


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