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Toy Soldier
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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This woke me up in the middle of the night. God bless our men and women in uniform...

Frozen in place, keyed to march,
To defend when ordered.  Think
In that uniform of starch
Fashioned, there could be a chink
-----like feelings?  A heart, perhaps??
Weary of the game of war,
Of hearing the haunted 'Taps'
Bugled one more time.  Before
It tolls for him, he stuffs fear
Within his breast, soldiers on-----
Strong.  Tough.  There's no room for tears
Or mourning.  And, come the dawn,
He marches towards his death,
Giving his all:  His last breath.

(c) 2007, Karla Dorman (1/16)


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 Reviews of "Toy Soldier"
Reviewed by Daring Sunshine
Reviewed on January 21, 2007
The bravery of our soldiers who give their lives, sacrifice! Thank them often, again & again. Great tribute!
LOL
Sharon

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on January 18, 2007
It is very sad that this world still finds the need for soldiers; no one should have to put his/her life in jeopardy for reasons of war if we had evolved at all from ancient times. Thank you, Karla. Love and peace,

Regis

Reviewed by H. Lena Jones
Reviewed on January 17, 2007
For God and country is his cry...a vow he made and intends to keep! We are truly blessed to have brave men as these. Where would we be without them? God bless soldiers everywhere who defend the rights of others. An inspired write, Karla. Well Done!

Love always
Lena

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on January 17, 2007
Well done karla..
Your friend,
Ron

Reviewed on January 17, 2007
A pen on the life of but one who honored his forefathers dedication to him.

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on January 16, 2007
your nobly capture the spirit of the soldier in this poem ...

Reviewed on January 16, 2007
Powerful statement, Karla!!!!! This feelings could be soooo true!!!!!!

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on January 16, 2007
So is the life of the soldier. Most of the soldiers I have known have admitted that they don't wish to die for what they believe but that they have little problem putting themselves in the position that it could happen. They are noble and far stronger than I could ever hope to be. I am humbled by their sacrifices and awed by their commitment. Powerful Poem!
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on January 16, 2007
Ooh, such a powerful and beautiful write, haunting but truthful. Great write my friend, you've brought tears to my eyes, but pride to my heart for our country and our troops.
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on January 16, 2007
This brings chills to me and tears for the spirit that endures this test of bravery to continue on another day.
Thank you.
Love,
Susan

Reviewed on January 16, 2007
Powerful write Karla may the Lord bless our Troops
GOD BLESS
MICHELLE~

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on January 16, 2007
And the truth marches on with these dear brave souls.

Reviewed by Debra Kraft
Reviewed on January 16, 2007
So sadly true, so hauntingly stated. Powerful.

Reviewed by Rafiriio Daniels
Reviewed on January 16, 2007
Sad but so real I agree...nice work!

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on January 16, 2007
Stark, sad but real. Well done and a great format here.

Fee

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on January 16, 2007
Great sentiments about the troops. When I was on base here the lads use their humour a lot, just to get by. Time to bring the boys home..

Reviewed by Rusty Daily
Reviewed on January 16, 2007
There is no one, I repeat no one, more special than those who would risk their life for the well-being of another. IMHO
Rusty

Reviewed by CJ Heck
Reviewed on January 16, 2007
This is a little too close to my feelings, but I have to say it's a wonderful poem, Karla -- you did a remarkable write about our soldiers.
Love,
CJ

Reviewed on January 16, 2007
Powerful tribute to our fightin' men and women; God bless 'em! And God bless you too, Karla; sobering, unflinching write on how it is for them! Very well done; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin sister, Karen Lynn. :(

Reviewed by Beryl McMullen
Reviewed on January 16, 2007
Beautifully written and how true your poem Karla It is the soldier that gives us freedom the soldier every time

Reviewed on January 16, 2007
A great tribute to the American soldier. love your deep patriotic feelings. Thanks dear sister/friend

Reviewed by Susan Sonnen
Reviewed on January 16, 2007
this is a very good reminder to us of the sacrifice they are willing to make each day while we are safe and warm.

Susan


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