Ain't What It Appears To Be (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on February 18, 2007

Ain't life exciting?
Even simple malaprops can leave us dazzled.

I like being teased. You do it well.
Richard

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on February 17, 2007

Karla this is another amazing write, thank you for sharing this...
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed on February 16, 2007

Another entertaining write, Karla. Tell it like it is! That's what I admire about your style. Soon, my friend, the hot weather will be here...sooooon! In the meantime, think warm! Works for me! :)

God Bless
Love, Lena

Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)

Reviewed on February 16, 2007

You might not believe it, Karla, but here in Wisconsin the "Reality" is a minus ten!
No Spring in this state...for sure for sure.

Enjoyed your poem, and thanks for the comments on mine

Hugs

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper

Reviewed on February 16, 2007

Interesting write! Sounds just like Florida.

Reviewed by Angel God is Love

Reviewed on February 16, 2007

This is great
Angela

Reviewed by Sue Hess

Reviewed on February 16, 2007

isnt' that true. the midwest is really cold right now. and more snow on the way. i enjoy your writing karla

Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten

Reviewed on February 16, 2007

I pictured a blue sky, lying in the sense of laying across a horizon...and the Son of God, crying out asking us "Where is our warmth?" So, in wanton of pleasing, we step out of our comfort zone and into reality of the situations of life as we see it...cold and harsh...and yeah, it slaps us in the face to want to change it, but...it hurts!
Amazing how you did this to me!
"Ain't What It Appears To Be", is a perfect title for this!
Enjoyed immensley!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on February 16, 2007

In England, that is our way of life..
Loved It K

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on February 16, 2007

Yip know this all too well..the clearer the sky the colder the feet!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Evelyn Simon

Reviewed on February 15, 2007

I know what you mean. Thanks for sharing, Karla. :)

Reviewed by J M (Reader)

Reviewed on February 15, 2007

It really does and I found out today also cannot use left side of my body for a few weeks so having fun one hand typing.....The WEind and slick streets This was good Karla!!!! Stay warm

Blessings, Joselyn

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on February 15, 2007

Moody nature...no wonder they call her SHE.
Love,
Susan

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling

Reviewed on February 15, 2007

boy don't it though, here in Kentucky the skies were beautiful and blue today, but the temperature was about ten degrees...looks can be deceiving you are right!
Blessings,
JOyce Bowling

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on February 15, 2007

Tanks for the reminder...

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on February 15, 2007

So true; this wintery weather is fickle! Very well done, Karla; felt the icy chill of winter in this poem! BRAVA! Keep 'em coming!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin sister, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg

Reviewed on February 15, 2007

Sounds like the makings of a good rock song Karla, like "Black Hole Sun".

When the sun turns cold
and the sky paints illusions
And everything you've ever known
Becomes something else.

You've piqued me imagination here Texas Gurl!

Light and Wisdom ...

Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy

Reviewed on February 15, 2007

Karla, my dear. I would love to see this in a more experimental form. It would bring more power to the words and emotions.

Bobbi

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater

Reviewed on February 15, 2007

Truth thaws the icicles and fresh water grows new roots come springtime, we be havin' a heap o' clover where the honey bees buzz anew without the staleness of winter's gossip. Love to you, Karla and Karen Lynn...Blessed Be...

Sage