Becoming Turquoise (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on July 12, 2007

SUperb!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed on July 12, 2007

NICE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! On top of the steep roof of the ocean I LIKE!! :)) Kate xx

Reviewed on July 12, 2007

Great metaphors here! Karla, your 'foor of the ocean' is the first such comparison I've read. Excellent message, too!

George

Reviewed by Kathryn Collins (Reader)

Reviewed on July 12, 2007

Karla

roof of the ocean, skies becoming turquoise. What a gem.

love,
Kathy

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on July 11, 2007

Sounds like heaven to me.

Elizabeth

Reviewed by K. Mulroney

Reviewed on July 11, 2007

Floating on the steep roof of the ocean. Wow, not THAT'S a metaphor!! Great piece Karla!

Reviewed by Susan Sonnen

Reviewed on July 11, 2007

I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewed by D Johnson

Reviewed on July 11, 2007

Sadly, I'm color blind, but I've always loved the word Turquoise and today you have made it visible.

Thanks,
Dan

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on July 11, 2007

Beautiful as always Karla, you never cease to amaze me with your poetic soul
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by Tiana Jett (Reader)

Reviewed on July 11, 2007

And turquoise is such a beautiful color just like you ... Beautifully penned ... hugs - Tee

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on July 11, 2007

At One With The Sea, Is A Very Cool Thing To Be!

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)

Reviewed on July 11, 2007

A bright picture, turquoise is a delicate color. Victor

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on July 11, 2007

Sweet felt the coolness of the wind on bare skin from reading this one well done.

Fee

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg

Reviewed on July 11, 2007

My favorite color - my favorite stone. You have captured it exquisitely. Brava! Blessings ...
Richard

Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten

Reviewed on July 11, 2007

floating thoughts in COLOR, no less!
Excellent write Karla!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on July 11, 2007

wonderful!!

Reviewed by Walt Hardester

Reviewed on July 11, 2007

Karla,
this is too cool, great job

Walt

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on July 11, 2007

I was made with the water of the oceans, waves were my crib and dolphing sang the lullabies.
Well done.
Georg

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on July 11, 2007

O, Karla, this is stunningly beautiful! Love the colored font; love the format, love the words you use! Excellent job; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D

Got cruise fever again?? YEP! LOL

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart

Reviewed on July 11, 2007

Oh Lord, Karla, I LOVE this poem. I felt it and saw it. Beautiful!!!