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Coma
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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Be careful what you say. Ears are listening ...

'Coma'

No man's land, this place I
find myself.  Hearing strange
disembodied voices
discuss my prognosis
and where I am on the
Glasgow Coma Scale:  it's
not looking good, poor dear
ain't long for this world.  Such
a pity.  No response.
Posturing -- too young, far,
far too young.  Sad.  Doctors
talk about pulling tubes
as if I've already
d  i  e  d.  Nurse gossip competes
with monitored beeps, hiss
from respiratored lungs:
who's screwing who, who bought
a new car, who's going
on vacation (Europe's
nice, they say).  Don't give a
flip:  let's get back to the
bidness of living:  give
me hope, throw me a rope
and pull me up out of
here, this weird Twilight Zone.

(c) 2007, Karla Dorman (7/6)


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 Reviews of "Coma"
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on July 19, 2007
You present quite a perspective within your verses, Karla. Merci. Amour et paix, ton ami de la C-B, Canada,

Regis

Reviewed by Kathryn Collins (Reader)
Reviewed on July 19, 2007
Wow Karla --

Scary. WEll written.

love
Kathy

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on July 19, 2007
Wow, a great poem that sounds like a bad dream, or a bit like the twi-light zone...you've written well, a clever idea my friend!
Blessings,
Joyce B.

Reviewed by Nicky Goodman
Reviewed on July 18, 2007
Excellent idea for a poem - so well written Karla - enjoyed this read very much. Nicky x(typo? bidness:)

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on July 18, 2007
Glad it is not you in the coma.
Doctors and nurses are very cruel
When I was 18 I worked part time in
a hospital....
Your friend,
Ron

Reviewed on July 18, 2007
Wow Karla this is amazing thank you for sharing, keep it up and be blessed
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on July 18, 2007
I have often heard that people who are in a sort of coma or truama, can hear and understand everything. Doctors and nurses should be careful what they talk about in such cases. Victor

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on July 18, 2007
Powerful offering Karla!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on July 18, 2007
Powerfully poignant....

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on July 18, 2007
So very sad, but true what's said while one lies in bed too sick to get up and pop them in the head!

Reviewed by Sue Hess
Reviewed on July 18, 2007
your writing always hits me in the gut...this is exceptional

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on July 18, 2007
You write of things as if you are there or part and parcel of the experience...gives me the chills, this one...Ed

Reviewed by George Thompson
Reviewed on July 18, 2007
Good write. Too bad there is so much truth to what you write. I love you quips in various lines that make this almost like a conversation taking place on paper without the quotes.

George

Reviewed on July 18, 2007
Love the words you chose for this write

"...talk about pulling tubes
as if i've already
d i e d. Nurse gossip competes
with monitored beeps, hiss
from respiratored lungs:"

excellent! brava; one of your best! keep em coming, and keep on writing!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, karen lynn. :D


Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on July 18, 2007
Bed manners should not only apply to lovers.
Hospitals beds are been transformed to a mere parking place for people in need of repair by the mechanics wearing white cassocks and helped by 9 to 5 "I can't wait to get home!"
Meeting a Florence Nightingale by the side of your bed in a city hospital would be like to have two Christmas in December.
Georg

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on July 18, 2007
give
me hope, throw me a rope

Very sadly, probably what many poor souls are crying out these days.

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on July 18, 2007
very well done and a clever take on this topic-loved it


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