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Break(ing) Point -- One Minute Poem
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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Poem 2007. Matches this year. Sorry it couldn't be happier ...

A break, desperately needed --
from stress, from bills,
from worry about where
our next meal is coming from.

A break, desperately needed --
from words, from words,
from a Muse that won't shut
up and let me rest my pen.

A break, desperately needed --
from ev'rything ...
just need some time away:
I have reached the breaking point.

(c) 2007, Karla Dorman (7/26)


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Reviewed by Mary Patterson
Reviewed on August 1, 2007
Many of us reach that point!... Hang on, the days will get better.. I always say,,"tomorrow is a new day, its bound to be better!". It usually is.........M

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on July 29, 2007
Dear Karla,

Knowing your strong spirit, you'll go far beyond any breaking point you may face. You & Karen are in my thoughts and prayers.

Love & Light always and in all ways,
Joseph*

Reviewed by Barbara Terry
Reviewed on July 29, 2007
Hi sis, and yes, we do need that time away from the maddening crowd. I agree with Cynth'ya in that never ever tell the muse to shut up, or she will get the idea not to help. Seriously tho, you do need "a break, desperately needed." Take some time, and go for a walk, enjoy the beauty that is the nature all around you. Go to a place where there are wild flowers, and wild strawberries. Watch teh deer as they romp carefree, or the bunny rabbit that his hopping to somewhere. Smell the fragrance the flowers give off, and just relax. This will free your mind from all that bothers you. Yes dear sister, take that badly needed break, because if you don't it could lead to burn out, and you are such a very good writer. Go Somewhere where there is no hustle and bustle. When I was a teenager, I had a stream to go and sit by, and the rhythm of the water flowing, and lapping against its banks, was very refreshing. I often wrote a lot in my diary sitting by that "river that flows." Thank you for sharing, Karla, because you have a family here that you can turn to when you need a break.

May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on July 28, 2007
Take it easy Karla.
I know, it's easier said than done.
Hugs
YF....Ron

Reviewed by Cynth'ya Reed
Reviewed on July 28, 2007
Girlfren'. . .MY Sistah. . .never tell the Muse to shut up. (smile)
blessin's, you're a Hope Diamond in the making, the pressure only makes you MORE of an original that CANnot be copied!
((((HUGS))) and mo' (((HUGS)).. .
cynth'ya

Reviewed on July 28, 2007
Karla get the rest you need and know you are in my prayers
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by Jennave Coz
Reviewed on July 28, 2007
Sometimes it grabs a hold of you...Then you must break away...I will pray, you find release,may it be replaced with what you need...Jen

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on July 28, 2007
Take some time and REST girl!!

We wiil be happy to see you happy!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Art Hernandez
Reviewed on July 28, 2007
Everyone at one time or another has felt this way and though we find the reality is at times to much to bear, there is always a way to release and find the serenity to ..... begin again...

I hope and pray for your success in this time of need...

Love and Peace....

Art Sun...

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on July 28, 2007
Bend, but for heavens sake don't let any push to break you.
A soldier, any soldier, of yesterday, of today or tomorrow has been forge from a steel that bends but will not break.
So, my little soldier, shoulder's back, head up and "damn with the torpedoes!"
That's my girl!
Georg

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on July 28, 2007
Karla, there are times we all need that break, so go take it girl, sit at the beach and read a good book, forget all that stresses you.ive stress free for a day, you will feel fantastic.

Rose

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on July 27, 2007
Wish you all the peace of mind

William
Love & Peace

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on July 27, 2007
I believe that its not so much the muse as it is the interaction and those in disparate parts of this world that can relate to your universal frustrations.

I can relate!

Reviewed by Walt Hardester
Reviewed on July 27, 2007
Karla,
I'd like my break "to go" with a side of fries....please

Walt

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on July 27, 2007
Karla, I pray that soon this will be replaced with joy and wonderful blessings for both you and Karen!

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on July 27, 2007
Karla...I wish you peace, always

Dan

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on July 27, 2007
And who doesn't need a break? Take one and quickly. Victor

Reviewed by Sue Hess
Reviewed on July 27, 2007
it is never ending. as i have gotten older, life has gotten a bit easier but i remember the pressure of it all. this is great karla

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on July 27, 2007
I can relate to this cry.... bills, no food, kids to feed, and no one to help. A bit overwhelming at times, and some times it seems too much to bear. (HUGS) we need to look up despite, myself included, love Holly

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper
Reviewed on July 27, 2007
Thank God for that pen in hand. It is a savior in disguise and silences the worries--even if for a moment--while attention is diverted away to some thought we want to capture and share. Writing is a wonderful relaxer.

Reviewed on July 27, 2007
Karla, you just gotta' believe that something good will happen. I know it isn't easy, but God has always helped us in the past; why couldn't He do it again?? Just have faith; know you are in my prayers! I love you!

(((HUGS))) As always, your twin, Karen Lynn. :( >tears! <

Powerful rant; I feel your frustrations in this one! Keep on writing! We need you here!!

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on July 27, 2007
let me know if you figure out how to get this-especially from the bills! Sometimes it all becomes just too much

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on July 27, 2007
It's always the very darkest, right before the needed morning break. Keep on, Keepin on, and this, too, shall pass.

Reviewed by Myles Saulibio
Reviewed on July 27, 2007
My Karla,
Hang tuff--God won't test you beyond what you can't handle.

Aloha and smiles
Myles in the Desert

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on July 27, 2007
Been there at one time or another, keep fighting, your good times will come...ed

Reviewed on July 27, 2007
Take rest dear sister/friend but let it not be too long. We need you here to feed our brain with the fine thoughts and wisdom
abdi-noor

Reviewed by Susan Sonnen
Reviewed on July 27, 2007
God bless! And good work for one minute!!! Try to relax, sweetie.


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