Nu cle ar Wasteland (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on August 18, 2007

I always wait till the morning...and usually forget what I wanted to write....guess it works the same...lol!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on August 17, 2007

Anything we take the time to right is worth the time to read Karla and thank you for writting this for we have all had days when the words just sat on the tip of our tongues.
Newfie Hugs,
Rose

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on August 17, 2007

If it's worth thinking about, it's probably worth writing about!

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on August 17, 2007

A philosophical question: If we know for sure than coming September next year the world will be obliterated by an atomic holocaust, will be it right to seek to father a children that by then will be three months old? Is not our duty to protect our children?
Nightmares of peaceful people provoked by the derranged ones in power.
Georg

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)

Reviewed on August 16, 2007

It is always hard to find the right word when writing. Great poem on a difficult subject. Victor

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on August 16, 2007

The mind of an intellect, always thinking and being creative.....

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on August 16, 2007

Karla this was defintely worth reading
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on August 16, 2007

Everything you and Karen write is well worth reading...e

Reviewed by Jerry Engler

Reviewed on August 16, 2007

I want to say kaboom, your whole brain just exploded like I have't cleaned mine off the wall a few times. If you're much like me, sometimes I can hardly wait to see what I might write next because I like surprises...Jerry

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on August 16, 2007

Your first line is a gem, making the poem very worthwhile, Karla!

ET

Reviewed by George Thompson

Reviewed on August 16, 2007

Ah, all the poems I've written and discarded..... I have twenty digits available to count them but ran out of digits before discards. Good write!

George

Reviewed by Myles Saulibio

Reviewed on August 16, 2007

Karla--don't let the finger fickle of fate catch you by surprise, you're six inches from success----between your ears is your brain---so give it rest and claim the masterpiece tomorrow!

Aloha!
Myles

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)

Reviewed on August 16, 2007

Keep writing Karla, you have so much to say to us all! Love Holly

Reviewed by Charles Keller

Reviewed on August 16, 2007

Sometimes my fingers move as I subconsciously "type" in bed. We never know when inspiration will strike.

I'm glad you survived the creation of this one.

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on August 16, 2007

Good one and we have all been there, it is even worst when everything seems to come together... rhytem, flow, meter, descriptives but all of a sudden one line don't fit
Fee

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper

Reviewed on August 16, 2007

I have a whole file folder full of idealistic beginnings like that, which started like a sudden shower and faded to gloom.

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on August 16, 2007

I love how your muse works, Karla; this is phenominal writing! BRAVA, one of your best!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Joyce Devenish

Reviewed on August 16, 2007

Hi Karla,
'The deadly mushrooming of a word' I like that.
If you don't die you probably forget.
Ideas don't always stay until morning.
Best wishes...JDM