S n a p ] (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Cryssa C

Reviewed on February 8, 2008

Love it! hee, hee...
Isn't that the truth!
Cryssa

Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G

Reviewed on August 27, 2007

Snap, I felt it, through your words Karla!
Very wisely said and felt!
Watch for those much added straws my friend~
Hang In!
Warmly, Warrior Lady Purple Sheeeoox

STay Postive!
STay SAFE!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on August 26, 2007

I did feel the earth rumble......I thought it was Ed matlack taking a dive...lol!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Walt Hardester

Reviewed on August 26, 2007

Look out Karla, there are more straws yet to drop.

Walt

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on August 26, 2007

Boy I think you and Fran were experience sympathy pains yesterday, this is a great write.
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by Joyce Devenish

Reviewed on August 24, 2007

Nice work Karla, I love your sense of humour. I know pain isn't funny but keep smiling. ...Bless you...Love Joyce

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on August 24, 2007

a strong feel to this makes it ring true for so many

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on August 24, 2007

I didn't hear the snap but I did hear the crash as your posterior did hit the floor...resembling thunder it was...;) e

Reviewed by Randall Barfield

Reviewed on August 24, 2007

you are so witty, always! cheers

Reviewed by Patricia Bankhead (Reader)

Reviewed on August 24, 2007

Cute write Karla.
Enjoyed!!!

Love, Hugs and Smiles
Pat

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on August 24, 2007

Sometimes it sure seems like we have had that one last straw dropped on us doesn't it...good write.

fee

Reviewed by K. Mulroney

Reviewed on August 24, 2007

Those straws are hard to give back, but they tend to open the eyes a little wider. Great piece Karla!

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on August 24, 2007

I feel like I'm in a dream, someone else saying what I'm feeling. lol What is this you're not my twin;-) My prayers are with you Karla, great poem!

ET

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)

Reviewed on August 24, 2007

We grow old, retire, hope to live a quiet life and find we get only pains and aches. Victor

Reviewed by Jerry Engler

Reviewed on August 24, 2007

Metaphorically and humorously speaking, cuz we ain't got any metafiveically to talk different, we have a chriopracter here in Kansas with a night job as a dancing scarecrow, perfect for straw backs...ouch, that hurt some more didn't it? But it was fun...Jerry

Reviewed by Nicky Goodman

Reviewed on August 24, 2007

Why is it called The Last Straw Karla? Bloody straws, it never is the last one - there is always another pesky straw just around the corner! This particular Last Straw was very good at it's job, {SNAP} so good, one thinks the other full load of darn straws had nothing to do with it!
Good poem - and as my camel is refusing to move off the floor, i will have to walk to the beach for a snooze without her, poor likkle camel - she could use the sunshine and the rest i think :o) Nicky x

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on August 24, 2007

Karla I think like Holly, what is normal when we get up in age, I think it is great when I can get out of bed and a miracle when I can walk the stairs without a moan so yes I've felt that SNAP and know where you are coming from. Thank you for sharing.
Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on August 24, 2007

Bend but please don't snap no more.
Like the doctor said..."take two aspirins and see me in the morning" after all it is not is pain he is talking about.
Cheer up girl, you are the one of us that is in the Armed Force with wings!!!
Georg

Reviewed by JASMIN HORST SEILER

Reviewed on August 24, 2007

I felt it! Wow! thanks Karla! Much Blessing on You! Jasmin Horst

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on August 24, 2007

I hope the pain, snappin', and poppin' stop soon; God be with you, Karla! Very well done; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love (and prayers), your twin, Karen Lynn. :(

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on August 24, 2007

Ouch, I think I heard that snap way out here. But maybe it was the lightning storm; we're havin some doozys these past few days.

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)

Reviewed on August 24, 2007

Some would ask in this day and age, "What is normal?" Seems no ones quite sure anymore. I'll keep on praying for you my dear, love Holly