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The Worst Poem Ever Written
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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Pray for me?


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This is the worst poem
Ever written.  Worded
Together in a fit

Of depression, it's just:
Blah.  Has meter, no rhyme.
It's not pretty to look

At.  No butterflies, no
Beautiful scenery,
No -- it's ugly, my

Mood at the present time:
It leaves me wondering:
Should I continue to

Write even though I'm not
Very good?  This, the worst
Poem ever written.

(c) 2007, Karla Dorman (9/16)

 

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 Reviews of "The Worst Poem Ever Written"
Reviewed by Rebecca Lerwill
Reviewed on September 20, 2007
Karla,
they say that reviews should only be positive, or not stated at all. But I'm too honest for that...and I usually very much enjoy your work, but this one.... yeah, indeed it's not very good.
Love you, though!
R~

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on September 17, 2007
"Yes my Lord, she will do Your work, No matter what others may say;
So please, send me every word, That Karla selflessly shares today." Buck up there lady. Everyone loves what you pen as they well should. Worst poem ever written? NEVER; not when the words come from your heart and from the One who gave you the gift. I couldn't begin to count the times I felt like I'd written my last poem or story. God bless you for all you do for others. Your friend in the mountains of New Hampshire. Paul

Reviewed by George Thompson
Reviewed on September 17, 2007
Ah, Karla, you got it out of your head and that gives you a certain "distance" to behold what you've written. When I have writer's block, nothing pours out on paper; yours did. I'd say that's something in your favor.

George

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on September 17, 2007
You are not alone!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on September 17, 2007
Don't send that money, Rufuz says that book is sold out...we used it for a beach bonfire to celebrate the end of the summer...keep smilin', Ed

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on September 17, 2007
Your smirkin in that pic, so I think you're funnin us! And if you wanna read some real real awful poems, just send $9.95 (Cash, no CODs) to Pee Wee Ed's Poem Purgatory, Atlantic City, New Jersey. We'll send ya a ton of 'em!

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on September 17, 2007
Karla it is not possible for you to ever write a worst poem for I look at the picture shown here and only see beauty. I do hope you see brighter days soon, for you will get past this slump dear,as I will pray to God for you to see better days ahead.
Catch the Newfie Hugs sent to you, Rose

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on September 17, 2007
Worst? not even if you tried to.
Georg

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on September 16, 2007
if the act of writing feels good at your core--keep writing-keep up the battle, in pressing on, you will get through

Reviewed on September 16, 2007
Karla its not the worst poem ever written, I will be praying the Lord will see you through this time of depression
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot
Reviewed on September 16, 2007
Hmmm Methinks the lady in the Pic is beautiful..Hope she cheers up real soon, will pray for that.
Hugs
Ch'erie

Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
Reviewed on September 16, 2007
The worst poem ever written - by you? That's an oxymoron.
Your writings always give ME something to think about. If this is your worst, it's pretty dang good.
So you've taken (your) "ugly mood" and given it life. Perhaps, now it's time to give it a decent burial. Your choice.

Kathy

Reviewed by Flying Fox Ted L Glines (Reader)
Reviewed on September 16, 2007
No it is not. I don't think you could write a "worst" anything! But you knew that.

Ted

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on September 16, 2007
I've had my times too and I'm sure it won't be my last. I think we can all testify to this.
Love,
Susan

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on September 16, 2007
Might Be You Should Quit Trien So Hard -Huh!

TRASK

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on September 16, 2007
(hugs) we are our own worst critic at times, keep writing my dear, God Bless, holly

Reviewed on September 16, 2007
The best poem ever written Karla it's from the heart and honest, and speaks to all of us, what else do want my dear? Jasmin Horst

Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang
Reviewed on September 16, 2007
You speak as a true poetess and author.
We all have those "days", Karla. This too,
shall pass. I look up to you, Karla, Really I do!
Becca

Reviewed by Ann Scarborough
Reviewed on September 16, 2007
No, it's heartfelt and wonderful. Nothing from the heart is ever bad. You make me think and remember. Your poetry is grand. Your poems about the storms makes me remember why I live in GA of all places when I was born and raised in Gulfport, MS, played and have wonderful friends in New Orleans. You bring my memories back to life. Your poetry is wonderful!

Lots and lots of hugggggsssss for you Karla.
Ann

Reviewed by stan nassano
Reviewed on September 16, 2007
Hardly Karla,
the worst is the one not writen,I shuould know I did a 4 year dryspell,I like the poem and the title,so i vote no,
stan

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on September 16, 2007
With a smile like that and the words in your soul, jump starting the way you see the world around you...I think if you look you will find your muse not too far away. Hang in there Karla, we all have times like this and as someone pointed out to me, the mark of our power as poets and writers is the ability to use our writing to soothe our own souls so we can move back into reality again.

Hugs
Fee

Reviewed on September 16, 2007
Karla~

I really don't understand the anguish you are going through inside (or maybe I can!). It's not a bloody competition; but I write a poem; get 78 reviews on one I just throw together while YOU pour your heart/soul into your words. I know it seems like you don't get many reviews, but honey, you DO. YOU soar with your poetry. We might have a tv deal because of your words. How many others can say the same? I will NEVER reach your caliber or skill at what you do; look at this for instance. In less than five minutes you threw together a poem. A darn good one! It's not the worst poem ever written. YOU wrote it; to me that makes it truly beautiful! So THERE!

God has given you a Gift, a Gift for words. Don't throw it away. Don't let people's impressions or lack of reviews bother you so much, okay?? I love you. And so do many here!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :(

Reviewed by Jerry Engler
Reviewed on September 16, 2007
Aah, you could get worse than this if you really tried. I know I could. Don't be depressed...hang in there, and everything else a friend should say to you. Most of all don't quit, don't quit, don't quit. I really get depressed, but I've decided I'm charged with surviving, and smiling anyway. It could be worse. Count your blessings. You could have met me before all those other guys, and we'd be crying together. That's one blessing you've had. Now move on to two, and do another poem.


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