Why Storms Cry (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Staci Gansky-Wagner

Reviewed on October 12, 2007

A very nice write :)

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price

Reviewed on October 8, 2007

Your picture and your words caught me up in the untamed wild wind. Excellent. Lizzie

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on October 8, 2007

Ignore Stan he would not know good poetry, if it bit him
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by Walt Hardester

Reviewed on October 7, 2007

Like Kimmy said...fuggid about these Assjolesa And just delete their reviews...I for one liked your poem....I like all your stuff...so There!
You TV star you.

Walt

Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten

Reviewed on October 7, 2007

Hey Karla~
I just notified Matt of this Stan guy...He's been leaving reviews like that to everyone tonight!

Anyway, without giving him regard...
This IS a MASTERPIECE and I wish I would of thought of it FIRST! LOL!
...You've penned it so wonderfully!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~

Reviewed by Jean Sharp-Latham

Reviewed on October 7, 2007

Beautiful. Now I'll always think about this during a storm. *hugs* Jean

Reviewed by Barbara Smith

Reviewed on October 7, 2007

Karla, never thought of it this way...this is truly beautiful! An exceptional write!

Reviewed by J AG

Reviewed on October 7, 2007

the photo is as impressive as the words ... and like the simplicity of rain, there is so much to a storm, high emotional release from nature for us or because of us? truly, "who'll listen to what she has to say...."

much peace,

jackie

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on October 7, 2007

You personalize it, in a creative way,making it real to the reader also. Fine work Karla!

ET

Reviewed by John Leko

Reviewed on October 7, 2007

...I will listen...for I see rainbows on those lashes...
John

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on October 7, 2007

I've never thought of rsain in this way but it works for me. This is tender, gentle Karla.
Love,
Susan

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on October 7, 2007

No wonder they call you "The StormSpinner"
Your thoughts express well what's in your
heart and soul
Thanks for sharing enjoyed much
Peace & Love Be With You

William

Reviewed by Axilea MU

Reviewed on October 7, 2007

a storm becomes human. With empathy, I feel sorry for her and wish I could listen.

Short and humane.

Axilea

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on October 7, 2007

interesting write-makes one do a bit of a turn around when thinking of storms-i read a children's book once where the storm was just looking for a place to sleep and wouldn't rest until it found such a spot-

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)

Reviewed on October 7, 2007

Well done my friend, love holly

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

Reviewed on October 7, 2007

Oh my,this is wonderful sweet lady..great job,have a wonderful day OK...Hugssssss

Reviewed by Sara Coslett

Reviewed on October 7, 2007

This is beautiful Karla. I see it more though as the metaphor for the love in our hearts and the storms that often result when we take a chance to stay awhile. ~ Sara

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on October 7, 2007

Everyone have a sad story before breaking havoc, why should a storm be different?
Georg

Reviewed by Janet Caldwell

Reviewed on October 7, 2007

Not to repeat Karen but this is a tremendous use of metaphors. I love it, wish that I had written it.

Love, Janet xoxoxo

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on October 7, 2007

So tenderly expressed and somtimes we all too often fail to listen, to understand and to heed mother natures emotions and we usually end up sorry because of it.

Fee

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on October 7, 2007

We should all listen to what she has to say, as you so obviously do.

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on October 7, 2007

Karla~

Great usage of metaphors; very well penned! BRAVA! Love that image; scary storm approaching! Head for the hills!!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce

Reviewed on October 7, 2007

Hi Karla:

This is a wonderful metaphoric write. Great job!

Sandie May Angel :o)