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He's Already Felt What I Feel (For Sheee)
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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Stay strong, know you are in my prayers. :) Love ya!


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Everything calm, sun out, birds singing,
a beautiful day.  And then, out of nowhere,
comes the storm churning my world to black -
got to find shelter, away from the wind, the rain,
the lightnings and thunderings making me cry out
in fear, in pain:  don't know how much more of this to
take.  No!  I refuse to live like this, afraid of every l i t t l e
cloud.  This is only temporary.  Storms come and storms go -
the sun always comes out after the rain.  Have to remember  that.
Have the strength to survive because God is right there, with me:  in
the middle of chaos surrounding me, He's already felt what I feel .........

(c)  2007, Karla Dorman (11/6)
     

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Reviewed by Amor Sabor
Reviewed on November 10, 2007
I think you described this so beautifully.
Amor

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
Reviewed on November 9, 2007
I felt the fear and trepidation. Remember, it's just temporary. such passion. Excellent write. Liz

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on November 8, 2007
In French there is a saying, "Arès la pluie, le beaut temps." It seems to suit the theme of your poem here, Karla. Love and blessings,

Regis

Reviewed by Suzie Palmer
Reviewed on November 7, 2007
Powerful write Karla!
Compassion for Sheee......... Sheeeee deserves it!
Love, Suzie :-D

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on November 7, 2007
Beautiful write, remember there's always a rainbow after the storms...great write for Shee and each who reads and needs encouragement! Enjoyed my friend, well done!
Blessings,
Joyce B.

Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
Reviewed on November 7, 2007
This is a wonderful, inspiration poem for Shee and for each of us who have a difficult path on life's journey.

God bless you. Kathy

Reviewed by Walt Hardester
Reviewed on November 7, 2007
Out of chaos comes order.
This is a solid principle of quantum mechanics.

Walt

Reviewed on November 7, 2007
Thank YOU Karla, Wicked Touching, I feel the LoVE!
AFTER the rain is the Sun, is the time when it's needed mOst!
YOu have inspired me to believe even MORE than I did before!
Jen is well today! and now she is call me (as I said in my earlier poem I just dropped in to share) AFTER she takes her #2/100 A.M. and #2 / 100 P.M. Dilantin, That way we both have it recorded!
Faith+Love=HOPE or is it HOPE+Love= FAith! Either way I love the Positiveness in this for ALL Of us! AFTER all STorms! in life! OOXO Love ya'! Warrior Gyspy Purple Lady Sheeeoox

STay Positive!
Lovely Positive sTrong poem!

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on November 7, 2007
Karla,

A beautiful realization my friend. Bless You Always, Paul.

Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot
Reviewed on November 7, 2007
Excellent write Karla, and I know Shee will be thrilled with this.
Well presented too.

Hugs, Miss yah
Chezza

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on November 7, 2007
Karla I am sure that Shee will really appreciate your words, Thank you for sharing.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on November 7, 2007
Chaos always will be doom by the all good weather's coming.
Georg

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on November 6, 2007
Oh Karla, this is so emotional and yet very inspirational, beautifully done...

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang
Reviewed on November 6, 2007
Excellent poem - what feeling it has too!
You know how to do it!
Becca

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on November 6, 2007
beautiful!

Reviewed on November 6, 2007
This is excellnt keep it up and be blessed
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by Ann Scarborough
Reviewed on November 6, 2007
Shee will love this, Karla! How determined and full of faith!
Love,
annie

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on November 6, 2007
Yes indeedy... Great poem, Karla. There is nowhere we can go from His presence, Psalm 139. Love to Shee... need to get a grip of what this refers to... Been so outa touch. Beautiful show of love and support. You are the Master/Mistress StormSpinner... K xx

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper
Reviewed on November 6, 2007
"Everything calm, sun out, birds singing, a beautiful day"
This sets the mood for your poetic story, and when the rainbow comes out---that Paul mentioned--you're going to be all the stronger for having gotten through it. Blessings.

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on November 6, 2007
Very nice Karla. During the storm remind yourself that they'll be a rainbow to brighten your time when it's safe to go out again.
Paul

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on November 6, 2007
Karla, this is a very heartfelt inspirational tribute,, very well done.

Christine

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on November 6, 2007
Superb motivational and inspired for Shee!

ET

Reviewed on November 6, 2007
Karla~

This is beautifully penned; brims with hope, even during the worst storms! You do these storm-inspired musings so perfectly! BRAVA; extremely well penned!

I think Shee will like it; I know I do!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin sis, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on November 6, 2007
Theres always something great to read from the storm spinner in texas...e

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on November 6, 2007
your writes as always are outstanding
PEACE BE WITH YOU....KARLA

William

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on November 6, 2007
Words of truth . . . Let 'er rip . . . I'm safe . . .

Reviewed by Walker Jackson (Reader)
Reviewed on November 6, 2007
Scary stuff.

Reviewed by Barbara Smith
Reviewed on November 6, 2007
Karla, you've captured a beautiful picture here of one who refuses to allow fear to destroy their life because you know that you have someone greater standing beside you every day. The picture goes great with this writing. Nice images, good flow, and an excellent poem.


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