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Dead is Dead
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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Sad, isn't it, what we women do to achieve perfection?

These images of skinny/starved
women displayed in magazines
scream, "thin is in!!"  Faces, bodies
sliced/diced to perfection scream their
own kind of pain:  i n a d e q u a t e.
And so, we do anything we
can to measure up:  even die.
How good will you look, lying in
a coffin?  Or will it matter?
Dead is dead.  Even with makeup ...

(c) 2007, Karla Dorman (12/5)


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 Reviews of "Dead is Dead"
Reviewed by Randall Barfield
Reviewed on December 18, 2007
Are we sure 'dead is dead'? (They always jump back at you in those movies like Fatal Attraction.) Seems like a great story or book title, don't you think? Cheers

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on December 6, 2007
It sicken me to see those skeletal looking models
all bones, i see nothing sexy about them at all
disgusting that's what they are
Love & Peace be with you

William

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on December 6, 2007
Don't like women like a walking radiography, just bones here and there as an ad for necrophilia.
Georg

Reviewed on December 5, 2007
Powerful write thank you for sharing
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on December 5, 2007
wow-a very powerful write!

Reviewed by Ann Scarborough
Reviewed on December 5, 2007
AMEN!!!
Love,
annie

Reviewed on December 5, 2007
There is a mega industy that works to supply in image, all that which makes women look attractive to men, the imprint of womanly shapes comes from formulations in a young mans mind in his formitative years, growing up in Europe I first found woman on this condinent, unattractive and to slim, to me they looked as if medical intervention could help them, since beauty is in the eye of the observer, this is how I viewed them, but I am like most others influenced by the media and general millieu, and now have accepted the general norm presented first by the trent setters and then the followers, not that any of this helps the dead or near dead ones.

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on December 5, 2007
What you don't see are the insides when vitamin and mineral starvation twists them inside out. It's a deadly game as many a magazine artile will attest and the biggest thing is...it doesn't pertain to 99% opf the female population.
Love,
Susan

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on December 5, 2007
Right you are Karla! We all love beauty but, I thank God for those who know it is the spirit within from which real beauty comes. We don't have to be either obese or anorexic there is a middle ground which most of us are in and that should suffice;-)

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on December 5, 2007
You've been watching the Spice Girls....

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on December 5, 2007
Yep. La Belle said it . . . Real men want real women, not skeletons . . . How obscene is that? . . . Jeez!!!

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on December 5, 2007
In my profession we have what is called "Vanity Sizing", in the fashion industry the manufacturers place smaller sizes on clothing so women will feel as though they are skinnier than they really are. It is appalling, but they get away with it in order to reap the profits. I really don't know where this world is going, woman just need to be curvy woman like they were born to be. I am proud of my curves and I wouldn't give them up for anything!!!
Peace, Love, and Light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed on December 5, 2007
It is sad, I agree. We have to make sure the younger generation can see what is inside counts way more than what is outside.

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on December 5, 2007
You got that right Karla and the truly sad part is that it is mostly the young who agonize over this and of course on the opposite side of the coin we have children and young adults struggling with obesity there seems to be no happy medium any more.

Fee

Reviewed on December 5, 2007
You are so right Karla, real women don't look like starved airburshed models and real men love them in their natural beauty.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on December 5, 2007
SO very true...but I think men can be blamed for alot of this....not all of them but most of them want the perfect body always!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on December 5, 2007
Now truer words were ever spoken...I guess I don't get it, I always thought it was the inner beauty that counts in the long run...well done Karla.
peace and love, Carole~

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on December 5, 2007
Our society needs to see the beauty within,,skinny is not the heart.

Reviewed by Barbara Smith
Reviewed on December 5, 2007
Karla, you are so true...these skinny models cause us to want to measure up to them and we starve ourselves to death. When I look into these skinny models eyes I see pure torture...probably haven't had a decent meal in years. I enjoyed this a lot...thanks for sharing such an important issue.

Reviewed on December 5, 2007
You're so right: no amount of makeup is going to hide the fact that dead is dead. Dead is the end of the road, the final stop. Sad what some women will do in the name of beauty! We need to stop embracing these sick-looking sticks called models and embrace women of ALL shapes and sizes!! Powerful food for thought you have penned, Karla; brava!

(((HUGS)) and much love, your twin sis, Karen Lynn. :(

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on December 5, 2007
This one I really like, today too many women worry about their looks rather than their health. I want those few extra pounds to help me when I do get sick. Thank you for sharing Karla.

Newfie Hugs are coming your way, Rose

Reviewed by Walt Hardester
Reviewed on December 5, 2007
Amazing what those morticians can do. I have heard some folks at funerals say, "Doesn't she look good?" My first thought is always, no, she looks dead.

Walt

Reviewed by Rebecca Lerwill
Reviewed on December 5, 2007
How about that 'food' for thought here, Karla!
Right on,
R~

Reviewed by Charlie
Reviewed on December 5, 2007
And when you look at their eyes, underneath all that glamour glitz, are hollow eyes that haunt their own selves with absense.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on December 5, 2007
Dead truly is Dead, so I doubt it will matter at all.

Reviewed by Charles Keller
Reviewed on December 5, 2007
Sad but true! Nice work.


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