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Hors d'oeuvres
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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... It has a hunger, ....

Image (c) 2007, Karla Dorman.


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A black maw yawns overhead,
a darkness filled with rotten
teeth gumming the blue from the
sky, bit by bit, piece by piece.

It has a hunger, this storm
approaching from the north, the
one with an insatiable
appetite for things below -

it will not be satisfied
until it picks us up with
fingers of wind - hors d'oeuvres to
be snacked on at its leisure.

(c) 2008, Karla Dorman (1/6)
  

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 Reviews of "Hors d'oeuvres"
Reviewed by Rebecca Lerwill
Reviewed on January 8, 2008
The kind of hors d'oevres I'm looking at.... crab legs, sushi and a dry Aussie wine....
Lovely write, Karla!
Becca~

Reviewed by Walt Hardester
Reviewed on January 8, 2008
At least we know Georg is back. Great write.

Walt

Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green
Reviewed on January 7, 2008
Brilliant!! How like you to take a highly creative approach to a
common subject, thus notching interest up and. . .er. . .blowing us away.:) Not only would it make hors d'oeuvres of everyone in its path, be dry as sticks 'time it got through. Scattered all over
H-&-gone!! Thanks for telling me about this. Been sick, and you
are speeding my recuperation!! Now crawl under your bed and stay!!!
Love from Carolina to the nth, Pea xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoX

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on January 7, 2008
Mademoiselle, please don't serve "that" kind of 'oeuvres when I am sitting at my Cafè du Paris looking at teasing minishirts...
Georg

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on January 6, 2008
certainly fulfills my appetite for imagery ...

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on January 6, 2008
very well written and clever--we have had blizzard conditions today

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on January 6, 2008
Great match up for this pic and poem Karla! Love the image you create with your word painting!

Love,
ET

Reviewed by Ace Antonio Hall
Reviewed on January 6, 2008
Very nice image of words. Your word choice is excellent. Great poem!

Reviewed on January 6, 2008
Another excellent poem, keep these comign Karla and it was good talking to you yesterday
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by Paul Williams
Reviewed on January 6, 2008
We are but tit bits on the dinner plate of fate...excellent poem & piccy, by the way, hope the storm passed you by, stay safe.

Paul;-)

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on January 6, 2008
Absolutely! When nature gets hungry we all best see what direction she's focusing on and move her dinner table with no "take outs!

Reviewed on January 6, 2008
Yikes what a storm. I love how you wrote this Karla it is very creative, great job creating a visual and good pic.

Reviewed by Rafika Anderson (Reader)
Reviewed on January 6, 2008
Menacing, intriguing, and intensely visual, this is a great piece of writing, Karla. I could feel it in my guts. Great effort!

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on January 6, 2008
Love this piece, but try not to think about those storms until I am forced to. Don't look forward to those spring storms sure to approach soon...

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by John Leko
Reviewed on January 6, 2008
...consuming appetite of atmosphere...a blue plate special at Storm Diner.
Well done Karla...
John

Reviewed by Joyce Devenish
Reviewed on January 6, 2008
Good write Karla. Great imagination...Well done...Joyce

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on January 6, 2008
Outstanding write my friend, powerful imagery...great photo, a stunning combination!
Blessings,
Joyce B.

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on January 6, 2008
STrong write here and well matched to the photo, I love the comparison of a monster just eating all in his path.

Fee

Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten
Reviewed on January 6, 2008
I picture myself on a little serving platter as the fingers of the air pluck me up like a tasty hors d'oeuvres, and chomp, then swallow me up...but, then it burped...LOL!
Your imagery is outstanding and so creative!
BRAVO!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on January 6, 2008
Oh my, oh my, people sure come and go a lot
around here.
YF
Ron

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on January 6, 2008
But then -follow the yellow brick road- Dorothy....

Reviewed by Art Hernandez
Reviewed on January 6, 2008
Your thoughts and pictures go so well together...

really enjoy them...

Reviewed on January 6, 2008
Karla,

NICE. Feed my StormFear now, why don't ya?? "Fingers of wind". Thanks. A lot!! LOL Excellent capture of the approaching storm in image and in compelling, powerful verse. Very well penned, Karla; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twink, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on January 6, 2008
You will not believe me but the weather outside the spitting image your picture...!!

Well written...powerful!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Eileen Granfors
Reviewed on January 6, 2008
Amazing, frightful and beautiful, and puts us in our place in the universe. This is powerful and moving. Eileen

Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on January 6, 2008
hummmmm...never thought of myself as an hors d'oeuvres...good write Karla

love, Carole~

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on January 6, 2008
...an interesting description of us mere humans in comparison to Natures fury...e

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on January 6, 2008
morsels for the maw that makes man feel more than miniscule... stay safe and sound, Darlin xx

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on January 6, 2008
Yep, that is what they feel like when you are involved in one of these buggers . . .

Reviewed by Theresa Koch
Reviewed on January 6, 2008
Powerful write Karla and great photograph...

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on January 6, 2008
It is frightening to feel the fear from thr hungerof the storms and wondering what it will chose next. Thank you for sharing Karla.

Newfie Hugs are on the way, Rose


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