Shift Change (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Cryssa C

Reviewed on January 16, 2008

"...stars greeted me with a twinkle in their eye," I love the way you become a part of the poem, and in doing so the reader becomes a part of the poem to. I can totally imagine walking the vast halls of Heaven at the sky's shift change. You say so much with so little.
Keep writing. I love it!
Cryssa

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Reviewed on January 11, 2008

"...this is the sky's shift change." What a beautiful way to think of it.

Reviewed by John Leko

Reviewed on January 11, 2008

...these thoughts really work.
I like this one Karla...
John

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on January 10, 2008

That is the time that I refer to as the "gloaming" of the day, Karla. It is one of my favorite times as well. Thank you. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on January 10, 2008

And what a marvelous thing to behold!

Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)

Reviewed on January 10, 2008

Beautiful. Love all your works dear sister.

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on January 10, 2008

Twinkle twinkle said the star, you went to sleep until the sun was back.
With a little dream wrapped in hope.
Georg

Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed on January 10, 2008

"Shift Change" has a peaceful voice of hope... A beautiful poetic flower.

In admiration,

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Charlie

Reviewed on January 10, 2008

I love it, Karla. It's really good. --Charlie

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on January 9, 2008

stunning photo as well as a wonderful write to go with it

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on January 9, 2008

I love the write, and the picture awesome
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on January 9, 2008

Beautiful writing, Karla; you keep on getting better and better at what you do! You are becoming quite the poetic genius; and I bow to your talents! BRAVA, take a bow! *clapping*

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin sister, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Rebecca Lerwill

Reviewed on January 9, 2008

For some reason this reminds me of night shift at the plastic plant I worked an eternity ago back in Deutschland...
Love,
Bec~

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling

Reviewed on January 9, 2008

Ooh, I love this Karla, it's such a gentle write...and well thought out. Great picture as well...enjoyed!
Blessings,
Joyce B.

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on January 9, 2008

Very nicely said Karla. Well done my friend.

Reviewed by Sheri Uy

Reviewed on January 9, 2008

Smooth flow of words... like the nature that slowly but surely takes its course...

Love,
Sheri