One Fifty A.M. (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G

Reviewed on January 21, 2008

Intensely written
Loss of sleep, what's on your mind?
Love this poem Karla!
Sleep better tonight!Zzzzzzz

Stay Positive!
Warmed in the Spirit, Warrior Purple Lady Sweet Sheooxoo Kewl picture!

Reviewed by Mary Patterson

Reviewed on January 18, 2008

They say we sleep less as we get older. Worry and stress have a lot to do with it ,,I think......M

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on January 18, 2008

I actually went to bed early last night, for my appointment, which was so much fun NOT!
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang

Reviewed on January 17, 2008

Interesting.

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on January 17, 2008

Funny, I stayed up till 3am myself...must be something in the air...? ed

Reviewed by Kathy Armijo

Reviewed on January 17, 2008

Sleepless worry - I'm worried - where did it go? I used to sleep like a baby, but now .......

God bless you. Kathy

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on January 17, 2008

sorry to hear about your sleepless night
I slept like a bug snug in a rug
Peace be with you

William

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on January 17, 2008

I was with you at 2:oo this morning, Karla . . . One of those nights . . .

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on January 17, 2008

Karla,

Know that God is with you always, and He'll never leave. May He grant you a night of restful sleep; you deserve it! Very well penned, brava! And that pic is rather frightening!! YIKES!! Am not lookin' forward to the springtime.....

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :(

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on January 17, 2008

i know of the same struggles you write about--all the worries are tough

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on January 17, 2008

Well said, been there, done that, and had the blood shot eyes to prove it...but that maybe is the best time to write in solitude of the dawn...hmmnnn good poem title for you there..."In Solitude Of The Dawn"...all yours.
hugs
Fee

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

Reviewed on January 17, 2008

Well done sweet lady,wonderful writing,have a wonderful day OK...HUgss

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on January 17, 2008

Karla,

January 17th is your Day of Infamy. Peace, Love and Blessings Always, Paul.

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on January 17, 2008

I can appreciate what you're going through Karla. Worrying over our problems will tend to do that and it seems the older I get the less sleep I need and the more frequently I wake during the night. Such is life. Naps during the day help though. Well said Karla. God bless you my friend.

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Reviewed on January 17, 2008

Karla, I like this part....."or is this just a nightmare with
eyes wide open in a scream?" Very clever

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on January 17, 2008

"...eyes wide open in a scream..." that's a literary gold nugget!!!
Hope that twister never returns.
Georg