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No Way To Treat A Worm
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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My last for a while, unless something happens - I will read/review, just need a break from writing -

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No Way To Treat A Worm

... picked the juiciest
of the lot, wrapped him
'round the hook O so
c a r e f u l l y (so not
to cause injury -
ever gotten snagged
by one?  doesn't feel
good, it's said), checked the
waters to make sure
he wouldn't freeze to
death, dangled him in
front of your eyes -- it
figures.  none wanted
him, poor little guy ..... ....

(c) 2008, Karla Dorman (2/9)

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 Reviews of "No Way To Treat A Worm"
Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
Reviewed on February 11, 2008
Know the feeling of the worm. Am I the bug or the windshield? Take care. But I know you're back and you sound even stronger than ever.

God bless you. Kathy

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on February 11, 2008
Is that the worm at the bottom of the bottle, better to eat it whole, saying the hell with the fish...keep smiling, keeps the world wondering what you're thinkin'...Ed & Rufuz

Reviewed by Mary Patterson
Reviewed on February 11, 2008
Well said Karla .. I like the play on words........M

Reviewed by Sandi Schraut
Reviewed on February 11, 2008
Well sweetie the fun in fishin is not in catchin anything although that is also fun it the tranquility, and the peace one gets floating on the water, dang, now I want to go fishin and here in Minnesota one has to drill thru ice to get to the water (and the fish) and frankly I hate getting cold!!! Lovely write although it has set off my fishing addiction (grin) Sandi

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on February 10, 2008
very clever--hope you are okay--

Reviewed by Rebecca Lerwill
Reviewed on February 10, 2008
Cute. Poor little bugger...
Will miss ya, sis!
Love,
Becca~

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on February 10, 2008
Very cute..stay safe and well sweet lady,,miss ya already...HUgsss

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on February 10, 2008
But next time the fishes will muderize him..
Cute one karla
Thanks always for your reviews..
YF with love
Ron

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on February 10, 2008
Whatever the reason, no matter Karla, take the time that only you know you need, and then I bet you'll be back with a blast, love ya, Holly

Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on February 10, 2008
Thanks for the smiles this morning...we all need a time to rest, take care!
love, Carole~

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on February 10, 2008
It ain't that no one wants the worm,
Today, there are far less fish in the sea (see?!)

And we all truly need a break from time to time.

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on February 10, 2008
Thank you for the smile...and beautiful photo!

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on February 10, 2008
Karen Palumbo just ran over your worm with her vrooom-vrooom!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Georg

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on February 10, 2008
Well this is defiantely a good one for the fishemen in the crowd.
Fee

Reviewed on February 9, 2008
I will be praying Karla, may the Lord help you through this
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on February 9, 2008
Take a rest, but try writing just one poem a day.Everyone gets burn out at one time or another!I won't say I'll miss you cause I know you'll be here;-)

Love,
ET

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on February 9, 2008
Gee, I could see you sitting there fishing on a warm, sunny afternoon, very enjoyable piece..

Be always safe,
Karen

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Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on February 9, 2008
Go'in fish'in...I see the sign. Check out a Visine bottle, empty the contentd, glue the top back on and add a diabetic needle in the top then puff a bead of air under the band of an earthworm...POW! guaranteed fish finder and food for the table.
Blessings and love,
Susan

Reviewed by Dee C.
Reviewed on February 9, 2008
That poor, poor worm...what a shocking life he leads!
Just think the he could be the beginning of lifes cycle.
Great write Karla!!
Dee

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on February 9, 2008
well if I was bait,,, I would hope you were in charge,, so sweet to check the water temp. Enjoy your break, hurry back.
Love, Christine

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on February 9, 2008
Enjoyed this humorous write my friend...I needed a laugh today, it's been a rough one!
Blessings,
Joyce B.

Reviewed by Charlie
Reviewed on February 9, 2008
Yup. Poor guy-- writhing at the tip with a hook through his middle-- I never was one for eating worms, though my sister tells me that if you eat one first thing every morning for breakfast, then nothing worse will happen all day. While I believe her, I'm still not biting! --Charlie

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on February 9, 2008
Yikes...Don't give ED your addy...His save the worms campaign will be after you...

Reviewed on February 9, 2008
Delightful poem, Karla; well penned! Love the pic! BRAVA!


(((HUGS))) and much love, your twink, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by John Leko
Reviewed on February 9, 2008
...you have opened up a can of...humor...with this one Karla...
good one...
John

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on February 9, 2008
Hah! Sounds like some of the scrawney things I used to try to bait a hook with . . . Cuteeeee

Reviewed by Cryssa C
Reviewed on February 9, 2008
Cute! Made me laugh... hee, hee...
Cryssa


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