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Mr Kleen
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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... could have done without the
extreme hoovering of
Mr Kleen on a Spring
cleaning binge:  when he said
he wanted things dusted,

that's exactly what he
meant - none of this namby-
pamby-swipe-rag-around-
in-order-to-appease.
No, he picked things up, swept

aside dustbunnies and
cobwebs that had taken
residence, along with
papers, long forgotten.
Pots and dishes, items

to be thrown through windows;
he scrubbed floors and walls so
clear, you couldn't see them
anymore - unless you
looked a mile away.  He's

a demon when it comes
to wanting things neat - it's
just too bad Mr Kleen
forgot to put things back
where they belonged, before -

(c) 2008, Karla Dorman (2/25)

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 Reviews of "Mr Kleen"
Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
Reviewed on February 26, 2008
Whew! You blew me away with this one. LOL
You are truly have an incredible pen.

God bless you. Kathy

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on February 25, 2008
Good natured nature...swweps up all your germs and blows them east too.

You're a funny woman but you need to be under frightening conditions.

Love,
Susan

Reviewed by John Leko
Reviewed on February 25, 2008
...great write here Karla...
I really like this one...uplifting story...with a sense of belonging...belongs where???...
John

Reviewed on February 25, 2008
I never did trust him, see. Very clever, fun twist...satyr...another cement block in the basement!

be well and happy,
Kathy

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on February 25, 2008
Love this one Karla, blessings always, holly

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on February 25, 2008
fun and clever write--enjoyed!

Reviewed by Robert Wilson (Reader)
Reviewed on February 25, 2008
could use one of those in my house. but i suspect you're talking out something that takes away whole houses. :)

Reviewed on February 25, 2008
Sometimes we just need to lock Mr. Kleen up in the cabinete!!

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on February 25, 2008
I have always said that mom Nature is the cleaning lady that cleans the beaches with a storm, so we think along the same lines, sort of...ed

Reviewed on February 25, 2008
Delightful piece of whimsy, Karla; enjoyed! Very well penned and illustrated; brava! Looks like that Mr. Kleen is Mr. Funnel to me; he'd get things done in a hurry! Just suck it up, and there you go! Clean as a whistle! LOL

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twink, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on February 25, 2008
Mr. Kleen taking care of plenty of business looks like to me . . .

Reviewed by Cryssa C
Reviewed on February 25, 2008
Hee, hee...
I think this is my new favorite of yours, Karla! Well done!

Cryssa

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on February 25, 2008
I just sit in the porch, drink Coors and enjoy the vyew as I hear Mr. Kleen puting the house upside down, before going inside I sweep the soles of my shoes, though.

Georg

Reviewed on February 25, 2008
Enjoyed reading this Karla.
Have an enjoyable time in your photography.

Blessings,
~Gwendolyn

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on February 25, 2008
I especially like the last three lines of this Karla. Good writing.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on February 25, 2008
And what a true demon Mr. Kleen can be.

Reviewed by G Bergeron (Reader)
Reviewed on February 25, 2008
well .... when he is through with your house send him here. lol. nicely done, dread is the day to spring clean.


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