P]inched (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by LILA BOSLEY (Reader)

Reviewed on April 25, 2008

Wow what a powerful way to put it I too have had a pinched nerve a time or two so I know the feeling well. you describe it so vividly hope you are feeling better by now Lila

Reviewed by Cryssa C

Reviewed on April 17, 2008

Ouch! Is there anything more painful??
Cryssa

Reviewed by Mary Patterson

Reviewed on April 17, 2008

A pinched nerve can be very painful! Your poem is a clever way to describe it.....M

Reviewed by Jon Willey

Reviewed on April 17, 2008

Unique way of relating your pain. A speedy recovery is my wish for you. Jon Michael Willey Blessings and stay safe.

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on April 17, 2008

Pain, that's not anything God will do, maybe a strong prayer will shoo away that little devil cauising it.
Get better, that's an order!

Georg

Reviewed by Cynth'ya Reed

Reviewed on April 17, 2008

Hey my sistah, I know the feeling well. Let's talk about it--you know my number I don't want to disturb you if resting. Just don't strain. blessin's and hugs,

cynth'ya

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

Reviewed on April 17, 2008

I hope you start feeling better soon sweet lady..stay safe and well...Hugsssss

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Reviewed on April 16, 2008

Hope you feel better soon, Karla. Keeping you in my prayers.

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on April 16, 2008

having sciatica, I know the feeling! I agree with Charlie, you sure do have great descriptive lines Karla! Please take care, and be better soon! My thoughts and prayers are with you!...ET

Reviewed by Charlie

Reviewed on April 16, 2008

I have a pinched nerve in my side... "Lightning !buzzes! down the
arm" -- a great discriptive line. --enjoyed this one. --Charlie

Reviewed by Randall Barfield

Reviewed on April 16, 2008

Precisely put. Blessings and wishes for improvement.

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on April 16, 2008

Strong write that gives us a glimpse of the pain you feel.

Fee

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on April 16, 2008

Having had a pinched nerve myself, I can truly feel your pain. And I truly hope better days are ahead. I had to go to a chiropractor for a very long time, to ease mine.

Reviewed by Gwendolyn Thomas Gath

Reviewed on April 16, 2008

Understandable, I liked the way you presented this penning "[P]inched"

Continued blessings and enlightenments,
~Gwendolyn

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on April 16, 2008

Oh Karla, so sorry you have this nagging pain, but sometimes we do have to learn how to live with pain that we wish so hard would just go away. Keeping you in my thoughts and prayers....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on April 16, 2008

I am praying for you Karla may you get better and soon
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)

Reviewed on April 16, 2008

Sharing the pain with you dear sister. You said it so perfectly that you have brought it too close to our hearts. You are ever in my prayers

Reviewed by Michael Guy

Reviewed on April 16, 2008

a pinched never is a real thing if it's that... but I have found that neck pain and back pain is also real but sometimes no doctors can help. I hope you find help but I had to turn to special "Yoga" exercises to get help for my lower back (and it is helping) Still it's a struggle. I think if we didn't have to sleep it would be easier! You write about LIFE (pain & joy included!)

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on April 16, 2008

well expressed--i am sorry you hurt--what happened?

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on April 16, 2008

I agree with Bernice; you are a poetic genius. I can well relate to this one Karla. Pain has become part of my every awakening moment of late. Rheumatod arthritis flarring up throughout the whole body ain't no fun at all. They say misery loves company. Don't you believe it. I'll pray for you my friend. God bless.

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh

Reviewed on April 16, 2008

Wao! you little poetic genuis! That pic is flawless

Reviewed by Nicky Goodman

Reviewed on April 16, 2008

Karla -this is such a powerful well written poem packed full of emotion which i empathise with as it storms off the page - may your faith keep you well and strong enough to find the peace and wellness you deserve - you are a fine poet and a woman of generous heart - a bright spirit, hope you are feeling better now, love to you, Nicky xx

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on April 16, 2008

Karla~

This one made ME hurt. *OW!* I am sorry you are having to go through this; the VA doesn't know what they are doing or talking about!! You are ever in my prayers; I pray you find the relief soon!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :(

Pain: very well expressed. *OWICH!*

Reviewed by Staci Gansky-Wagner

Reviewed on April 16, 2008

oohhhh feel better. Nice pic

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on April 16, 2008

In fact this shows how much we are a part of the whole. As both the nerve and lightning are electric...

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on April 16, 2008

Not much different on this end but that my pain originates on the opposite end of the spine...hope yours does dissipate soon...ed

Reviewed by Bonnie May

Reviewed on April 16, 2008

Oh Karla, I'm so sorry your in pain. Lay down my friend and heal. Love you, Love, Bonnie