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Tanka: Night Whispers
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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Origami thighs
unfold delicately in
the light of the moon ---
midnight finds secret lovers
on the Orient Express

(c) 2008, Karla Dorman (5/18)
 

 


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 Reviews of "Tanka: Night Whispers"
Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on May 26, 2008
I love it Karla as you can almost vision it as a peeping Tom as it gazes down on us. Thank you for sharing.

Newfie Hugs are on the way, Rose

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on May 24, 2008
Love on the Orient Express! Passion entwined with mystery. Delightful. Stay safe. JMW

Reviewed by Mariann Klimczuk
Reviewed on May 20, 2008
Short,powerful but yet such a profound expression of intimacy.

Reviewed by John Leko
Reviewed on May 20, 2008
...wonderful creativity...finds much beauty...within your train of thought.
excellent Karla...
John

Reviewed by Mary Patterson
Reviewed on May 20, 2008
Taking a romantic trip!........M

Reviewed by Cryssa C
Reviewed on May 19, 2008
Steamy... only rated "G"?

Cryssa :~)

Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten
Reviewed on May 19, 2008
Your Whispers, Radiate outloud! Damn this is good! :)
So few words, so much to mind!
Take a bow, girl!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on May 19, 2008
WOW!

Reviewed on May 18, 2008
Karla this is amazing, keep these poems coming
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on May 18, 2008
Karla...this is absolutely gorgeous...sensual and passionate. I love it!

Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
Reviewed on May 18, 2008
The pictures that come to mind ... perhaps a bit "X" rated. Well done, Karla.

God bless you. Kathy

Reviewed on May 18, 2008
Beautifully serene piece, Karla; very nice! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twink, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed on May 18, 2008
Even the moon is smiling on this one Karla, Bless you! Jasmin Horst

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on May 18, 2008
Excellent. I hear the call of the train in the night. Whispering in the distance.

Ron

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on May 18, 2008
This is heavenly Karla, so beautiful, love Holly

Reviewed on May 18, 2008

Romantically sublime.

In admiration,

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper
Reviewed on May 18, 2008
Sensouous delight--as thighs unfold. And what a moon that is in the picture.

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
Reviewed on May 18, 2008
Awesome write. Liz

Reviewed by Charlie
Reviewed on May 18, 2008
This is your best poem ever, Karla. Publishable. You need to sub it to some magazines... let me think on where... --Charlie

Reviewed on May 18, 2008
Ahhh quite different combined with just the right amount of sensuality and mystique.

Blessings,
~Gwendolyn


Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on May 18, 2008
... I just don't BELIEVE this! I have been trying to post a pic to go with my today's post of the moon I shot last July... just like this one! It was massively oversized so I gave up. Wish I could also say it was shot from the Orient Express, but sadly not... just out my bedroom window here in Dorset! :)) This is totally delicious, Karla, and appeals greatly to the Agatha Christie in me. Hmmmmmm... origami thighs... Sorry... but you know I just can't resist... were they a couple of Yogi Bares, by any chance??????????????!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :))))))))))))))))) XXXXXXXXX "Tanks a lot Kate"... "no problem, Karla!" :)))))))

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on May 18, 2008
Beautiful shot of the moon. I love this tanka, very nicely done.
Did you know that my secret desire is to ride the Orient Express? You have a beautiful day.
Peace, love, and light,

Happy Scorpio Full Moon!
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Robert Wilson (Reader)
Reviewed on May 18, 2008
Origami thighs. I like that. Folding then unfolding. Quite an image. :)

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on May 18, 2008
Sounds like you need a vacation on that Orient express...e

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on May 18, 2008
Wonderful write, a bit mysterious...well done dear friend!
Blessings from Ky.
Joyce B.

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on May 18, 2008
From whom are the fingers folding those thigs to an origamy swan?

Georg

Reviewed by Bonnie May
Reviewed on May 18, 2008
Lovely thought, lovely write. You can't hide anywhere from that full moon can ya? Love ya, Bonnie


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