For Charlie and Cryssa - hope I did the Ogres proud. :)
She tried, how she tried, to
explain to her Daddy how
she had grounded the car
up to its axil(eas) in four
tornado holes. Tears
clouded her sky; rain leaked
from the corners of her eyes,
obscuring her vision. She
knew -- she knew -- he'd be
disappointed, and that's
what hurt the most. It would
do no good to lie; he could
sniff out a lie, a falsehoo(l)d
faster than anyone should.
Her tears flooded over her
cheeks and down her dress;
she cried so hard, words
were lost in the gasp of the
wind. She was miserable.
"I didn't mean it, Daddy," was
all she could say before she
dissolved under the heaviness
of his glare. He sighed and
sucked her into the safety of his
arms. He rumbled comfort into
her ear: "No harm done. You
are like me: stubborn. Whoo!
Don't cry. When this is all through,
what memories we'll have." He
called the to(e) truck to pull the
car out of the miry muck and
afterward, went out for ice cream
(green, of course), because all
Ogres like sweets now and then
(despite the stories you've heard).
How he'd give her chores to do
and how she screwed up every
time: didn't lessen his love for her.
(c) 2008, Karla Dorman (6/4)
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Reviews of "The Ogress Chronicles: Can't Please Daddy All The Time"
Yes there will be times when one ponder the funny things in youth that you did. However, there always seems to be more fun events to laugh at than cry after a while.
Your imaginitive words take wing with this poem, Karla. Daddys are like that: they bristle at their "little girls", but never stop loving 'em...ever!
Blessings and {{{HUGS}}} ~~ Micke
This is good truly good. Like the fact he took you for ice cream and such a good reward for an ogress. You knew how to break him down all along with all the practice over the years. Good write. **********
Chuckling here dear Karla. And this is, without doubt, in my realm of experience, the longest piece that you have ever written. Kudos on a job well done!
Peace ...
Reviewed by Tiana ~ (Reader)
Reviewed on June 4, 2008
Ah Karla, you brought me a smile with this fantastic poem ... hugs
Oh, Karla!! hee, hee... I LOVE it!! You did the Ogress proud! I love the way you brought the rumble and rain and the wind of storms into it! Loved the story...loved the ending... I hope my kids understand the lesson you taught with this...
Ogures do have a softer side from time to time; you've demonstrated this endearing quality in this beautiful poem! You have put shades of our daddy in here; how he'd thounder with anger and then seeing we were truly sorry, he'd pull us into the shelter of his loving arms and make us realize just how much he really loved us. Very well written; brava!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D *clapping*
Each person is but a grain of sand resting beside the sea. This thought sets the tone for Jill Eisnaugle’s latest poetry collection, Beside Still Waters.
wonderful write...
John
Yes there will be times when one ponder the funny things in youth that you did. However, there always seems to be more fun events to laugh at than cry after a while.
Take care Karla and stay blessed,
~Gwendolyn
Georg or geOr or rOge or...
Newfie Hugs, Rose
Blessings and {{{HUGS}}} ~~ Micke
Peace ...
Be always safe,
Karen
God Bless
Michelle!
Cryssa :~)
Ogures do have a softer side from time to time; you've demonstrated this endearing quality in this beautiful poem! You have put shades of our daddy in here; how he'd thounder with anger and then seeing we were truly sorry, he'd pull us into the shelter of his loving arms and make us realize just how much he really loved us. Very well written; brava!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D *clapping*
Blessings,
Joyce B.