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The Ogress Chronicles: Can't Please Daddy All The Time
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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For Charlie and Cryssa - hope I did the Ogres proud. :)

She tried, how she tried, to
explain to her Daddy how
she had grounded the car
up to its axil(eas) in four
tornado holes.  Tears

clouded her sky; rain leaked
from the corners of her eyes,
obscuring her vision.  She
knew -- she knew -- he'd be
disappointed, and that's

what hurt the most.  It would
do no good to lie; he could
sniff out a lie, a falsehoo(l)d
faster than anyone should.

Her tears flooded over her
cheeks and down her dress;
she cried so hard, words
were lost in the gasp of the
wind.  She was miserable.

"I didn't mean it, Daddy," was
all she could say before she
dissolved under the heaviness
of his glare.  He sighed and
sucked her into the safety of his

arms.  He rumbled comfort into
her ear:  "No harm done.  You
are like me:  stubborn.  Whoo!
Don't cry.  When this is all through,

what memories we'll have."  He
called the to(e) truck to pull the
car out of the miry muck and
afterward, went out for ice cream
(green, of course), because all

Ogres like sweets now and then
(despite the stories you've heard).
How he'd give her chores to do
and how she screwed up every
time:  didn't lessen his love for her.

(c) 2008, Karla Dorman (6/4)

 

 


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 Reviews of "The Ogress Chronicles: Can't Please Daddy All The Time"
Reviewed by Bernice Angoh
Reviewed on June 5, 2008
This is delightful, I think Charlei and Cryssa will be happy!

Reviewed by John Leko
Reviewed on June 5, 2008
...given the nature of sensitivity...your imaginative pen finds a place in ones heart here Karla.
wonderful write...
John

Reviewed on June 5, 2008

Yes there will be times when one ponder the funny things in youth that you did. However, there always seems to be more fun events to laugh at than cry after a while.

Take care Karla and stay blessed,
~Gwendolyn


Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper
Reviewed on June 5, 2008
How precious are the memories that come to us from times past. Your poem is beautiful.

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on June 5, 2008
This Ogre doesn't like "green" but what the heck...they are my girls so I will let is go by with my best smile!

Georg or geOr or rOge or...

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on June 5, 2008
A Daddys love is very strong Karla, a wonderful poem and I was surprised at the length. Thank you for sharing.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on June 4, 2008
You put a smile on my face Karla.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on June 4, 2008
Karla you did real good! You are now a full fledged Ogress;-) WTG!...ET

Reviewed on June 4, 2008
Your imaginitive words take wing with this poem, Karla. Daddys are like that: they bristle at their "little girls", but never stop loving 'em...ever!
Blessings and {{{HUGS}}} ~~ Micke

Reviewed by Lois Christensen
Reviewed on June 4, 2008
This is good truly good. Like the fact he took you for ice cream and such a good reward for an ogress. You knew how to break him down all along with all the practice over the years. Good write. **********

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on June 4, 2008
Fathers are always more perceptive and kinder than we imagine when we are still young. God bless.JMW

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on June 4, 2008
Chuckling here dear Karla. And this is, without doubt, in my realm of experience, the longest piece that you have ever written. Kudos on a job well done!
Peace ...

Reviewed by Tiana ~ (Reader)
Reviewed on June 4, 2008
Ah Karla, you brought me a smile with this fantastic poem ... hugs

Reviewed by Charlie
Reviewed on June 4, 2008
Funny girl-- I love it! What a shock to see that in my in-box :) --Wanna play some more? --Charlie

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on June 4, 2008
Absolutely fantastic and so imaginative. I'd say you have done them proud.....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed on June 4, 2008
Karla this is awesome thank you for sharing
God Bless
Michelle!

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on June 4, 2008
Tis cool, though an Ogress is a female Ogre making you the ogre and daddy the good guy in all of this...ed

Reviewed by Cryssa C
Reviewed on June 4, 2008
Oh, Karla!! hee, hee... I LOVE it!! You did the Ogress proud! I love the way you brought the rumble and rain and the wind of storms into it! Loved the story...loved the ending... I hope my kids understand the lesson you taught with this...

Cryssa :~)

Reviewed on June 4, 2008
Karla~

Ogures do have a softer side from time to time; you've demonstrated this endearing quality in this beautiful poem! You have put shades of our daddy in here; how he'd thounder with anger and then seeing we were truly sorry, he'd pull us into the shelter of his loving arms and make us realize just how much he really loved us. Very well written; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D *clapping*

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on June 4, 2008
Well done my friend, enjoyed this I think you did a wonderful job...written with heart and great imagery! Loved it!
Blessings,
Joyce B.


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