Poetic Home For Rent (Answer to Challenge) (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Cryssa C

Reviewed on June 9, 2008

Sounds like a wonderful place to visit. A homey place where I would feel comfortable.
Cryssa

Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)

Reviewed on June 7, 2008

Wonderful! A place every poet should be proud of

Reviewed by Robert Wilson (Reader)

Reviewed on June 6, 2008

Who's Jill? Did she go up the hill with Jack? I better keep my shoes on. My wife says I have foot fungus. :)

Reviewed by Bonnie May

Reviewed on June 6, 2008

Sounds great, when can I move in? Its home because you're there. Love, Bonnie

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on June 6, 2008

Can I bring about a dozen of my critters? I promise they'll take their shoes off, too.

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on June 6, 2008

I can hear the words of laughter,, great fun,, and soooo inviting,,,
do you make coffee????
Love, Christine

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on June 6, 2008

My shoes are already off, but watch for that mean elbow of yours near my eye (I am sitting just to the left, Karen Lynn can't take pictures)

Georg

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Reviewed on June 5, 2008

Sounds like a place of comfort...a real home!

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on June 5, 2008

Now that's the kind of invitation i love to hear.
challenge well met!...Great pic Karla!;-),,,ET

Reviewed by Axilea MU

Reviewed on June 5, 2008

Looks like a real place, especially if there's dust ;-) I love the image of lively and warm words that come around.

Axilea

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on June 5, 2008

Karla~

I would be happy to be anywhere with you, just as long as we're together. Clutter or no clutter, fancy frills or none, it's still home, and there's nobody I'd rather be with than YOU. Outstanding; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twinkles, Karen Lynn. :D

Love the pic; of course *I* took it! LOL

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on June 5, 2008

Wonderful entry into the contest and your home sounds like the kind of home I am used to and grew up in...love the shirt too by the way.
hugs
Fee

Reviewed by Lois Christensen

Reviewed on June 5, 2008

I don't mind dust and clutter. Sounds like a lived in home. My deceased Tom always said his home looked lived in when people came to visit and he welcomed all who came. I think I will take and sit a spell. Good write**********

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on June 5, 2008

Karla who needs the four seasons or a million dollar mansion as long as you have a comfortable roof over your head then you are indeed blessed
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on June 5, 2008

Well Karla I think it sounds very inviting and I know too well we would have a tea as I would enjoy reading much of your words. You look very comfortable in your picture so I will take you up on the offer one day. Thank you for sharing.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling

Reviewed on June 5, 2008

I would love to come and sit a spell my friend, I'm sure I would feel at home! Loved this...especially the second stanza, very creative...great photo!
Blessings,
Joyce B.

Reviewed by Jon Willey

Reviewed on June 5, 2008

There is great warmth and sincerity in your invitation. Why would anyone not accept. God bless. JMW

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on June 5, 2008

Well, maybe like you, I can rent the basement...? ;) ed

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper

Reviewed on June 5, 2008

Sounds like the kind of home most folks would feel comfortable in. Nice write.

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh

Reviewed on June 5, 2008

I don't mind the paper and pens but that dust will anger my allergies,. Lovely poem Karla! You look so relaxed in that pic, who wouldn't want to join you??? :-)

Reviewed by Tuchy (Carl) Palmieri

Reviewed on June 5, 2008

karla home is where you heart is so bring your heart
all the best tuchy

Reviewed by Sara Coslett

Reviewed on June 5, 2008

Sounds like my kind of place. I especially love the imagery of

The second you enter, books
and paper and pens rise to
greet you; my words love to
climb into laps, purring, happy

~ Sara

Reviewed by Jill Eisnaugle

Reviewed on June 5, 2008

I don't have a million dollar home, either, Karla (though I live within a half a mile of them), but my home is where I'm most at peace. It's nice to read that your apartment has the same affect for you. (Ohio will still be 'home sweet home' for both of us, though, I know.)

Thanks for taking the challenge.

Hugs & Love,
Jill

Reviewed by Gene Williamson

Reviewed on June 5, 2008

Sounds like a nice, warm, creative home to me, Karla. - Gene.

Reviewed by John Leko

Reviewed on June 5, 2008

...such a comfortable invitation...finds your friendship in pen...one to hold dear.
wonderful write Karla...
John